题目内容
19.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华.你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物.请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的主要贡献;
3.该人物对你的影响.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是红星中学高一学生李华.你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物.请你给Jim回信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:该人物是谁;该人物的主要贡献;该人物对你的影响.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:hear from收到某人的信息;As for至于,关于;In fact事实上;opened our eyes大开眼界;
I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)
He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.(高分句型一)
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(高分句型二)He,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.(高分句型三)That opened our eyes to the world.In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | throw away | B. | get away | C. | get rid of | D. | get away with |