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【题目】假如你是李华,今天被诊断出得了一种重病,需要住院治疗相当长一段时间。请你对比生病前后你对学校学习生活的感受,写一篇文章。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可适当增加细节,使文章层次分明,行文连贯,

参考词汇:被诊断有……病be diagnosed with

【答案】I was diagnosed with a serious disease today, so I can’t go to school to study together with my classmates and have to stay in hospital for a long time. Before I was ill, I didn’t enjoy my busy school life—doing so many exercises every day, which made me tired and my life boring, but now I have realized that I was actually living a happy life in those days. Besides, when I was healthy, I thought I would always be healthy because I was still young. Never had I thought I would be so terribly ill one day, never had I thought I would be off school for long, and never had I thought I would miss my school days so much! Fortunately, the doctor told me that my disease could be cured. So when I am able to go to school again, I will truly value my precious health and fully enjoy my school life, however busy it is.

【解析】本文要求讲述生病前后你对学校学习生活的感受,此作文贴近学生生活,学生很容易有话可写。成文时要注意以下几点:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:灵活变换,主要时态应是一般过去时和现在时,因为涉及到以前和现在的对比;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:首先说明自己被诊断出得了一种重病,需要住院治疗;接着讲述生病前后对学校学习生活的感受;最后总结陈述自己的看法。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,120单词左右。7.不能使用原文语句。

【范文亮点】Before I was ill, I didn’t enjoy my busy school life—doing so many exercises every day, which made me tired and my life boring, but now I have realized that I was actually living a happy life in those days.时间状语从句,非限制性定语从句,宾语从句;Besides, when I was healthy, I thought I would always be healthy because I was still young. 状语从句;Never had I thought I would be so terribly ill one day, never had I thought I would be off school for long, and never had I thought I would miss my school days so much!倒装句。

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3 .They eat injured and diseased fish. Their hunting activities mean that the numbers of other fish in the ocean do not become too great. This protects the plants and other forms of life that exist in the oceans.

People hunt sharks for sport, food, medicine and their skin. Experts say the international market for some kinds of sharks has increased greatly because many parts of a shark are valuable. 4 . Shark liver oil is a popular source of Vitamin. The skin of a shark can be used like leather. In Asia, people enjoy a kind of soup made from shark fins. Experts say a fisherman can earn a lot of money for even one kilogram of shark fins.

Sharks are among the oldest animals on Earth. 5 If too many sharks in one area are killed, the group of shark may never return to normal population levels

A. The others give birth to live young.

B. Sharks are important for the health of the world's oceans.

C. This is a threat to other form of life in the ocean.

D. Collectors pay thousands of dollars for the jaws of a shark.

E. Sharks are valuable to us and we can make full use of them.

F. But some sharks are in danger of disappearing from Earth.

G. Sharks eat fish, other sharks, and plants that live in the ocean

【题目】The easy way out isn’t always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat Doug, my husband of one month, to a special meal. I looked through my cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as Doug left for work. As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dong loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was a sticky dough(面团)covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had failed, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldn't have to face Doug laughing at my work.

I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Doug got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing. Looking out, I saw Doug standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in out rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder. Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast (酵母)made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the 'living thing 'was and why it was there. I don't know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing--Doug or me?

1The writer's purpose in writing this story is ___________

A. to tell an interesting experience

B. to show the easiest way out of a difficulty

C. to describe the trouble facing a newly married woman

D. to explain the difficulty of learning to cook from books

2Why did the woman's attempt at making the bread turn out to be unsuccessful?

A. The canned orange had gone bad.

B. She didn't use the right kind of flour.

C. The cookbook was hard to understand.

D. She did not follow the directions closely.

3Why did the woman put the dough in the rubbish bin?

A. She didn't see the use of keeping it

B. She meant to joke with her husband.

C. She didn't want her husband to see it .

D. She hoped it would soon dry in the sun.

4What made the dough in the rubbish bin make the noise?

A. The rising and falling movement.

B. The strange-looking marks.

C. Its shape.

D. Its size.

【题目】I remember my mother as a strong woman. She came to America when she was 12—old enough to remember her language, she achieved scores and grades high enough to be admitted to Duke University. With a degree in computer science, she finally became the manager of a company in New York. My mother could give fluent speeches, say “wolves” correctly.

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1From where might the author’s mom come to America?

A. China B. England

C. Russia D. Canada

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A. think clearly B. express herself well

C. speak D. open her mouth.

3The underlined word “stroke” in the 4th paragraph most probably refers to .

A. an accident B. a hit

C. an illness D. a robbery

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A. a strong mother B. the importance of language

C. a family disaster D. the significance of teaching language

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