题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,今天被诊断出得了一种重病,需要住院治疗相当长一段时间。请你对比生病前后你对学校学习生活的感受,写一篇文章。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节,使文章层次分明,行文连贯,
参考词汇:被诊断有……病be diagnosed with
【答案】I was diagnosed with a serious disease today, so I can’t go to school to study together with my classmates and have to stay in hospital for a long time. Before I was ill, I didn’t enjoy my busy school life—doing so many exercises every day, which made me tired and my life boring, but now I have realized that I was actually living a happy life in those days. Besides, when I was healthy, I thought I would always be healthy because I was still young. Never had I thought I would be so terribly ill one day, never had I thought I would be off school for long, and never had I thought I would miss my school days so much! Fortunately, the doctor told me that my disease could be cured. So when I am able to go to school again, I will truly value my precious health and fully enjoy my school life, however busy it is.
【解析】本文要求讲述生病前后你对学校学习生活的感受,此作文贴近学生生活,学生很容易有话可写。成文时要注意以下几点:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:灵活变换,主要时态应是一般过去时和现在时,因为涉及到以前和现在的对比;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:首先说明自己被诊断出得了一种重病,需要住院治疗;接着讲述生病前后对学校学习生活的感受;最后总结陈述自己的看法。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,120单词左右。7.不能使用原文语句。
【范文亮点】Before I was ill, I didn’t enjoy my busy school life—doing so many exercises every day, which made me tired and my life boring, but now I have realized that I was actually living a happy life in those days.时间状语从句,非限制性定语从句,宾语从句;Besides, when I was healthy, I thought I would always be healthy because I was still young. 状语从句;Never had I thought I would be so terribly ill one day, never had I thought I would be off school for long, and never had I thought I would miss my school days so much!倒装句。