题目内容
【题目】假定你是山西大学附属中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1.学会学习:方法,习惯等;
2.学会做人:真诚,友善;
3.学会其他:考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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【答案】Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years , our school life will be challenging. First,we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts ,you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
【解析】此文为提纲式作文,要求写发言稿,主题为: What to learn in senior high school?要点有:1.学会学习:方法,习惯等;2.学会做人:真诚,友善;3.学会其他:考生自拟。注意审题,要点要全。人称可用第一人陈,时态可用一般过去时,.
亮点:
使用高级句式: 如: It is my honour to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.使用形式主语句和宾语从句.
Developing a good habit is also of importance. 分词做主语
It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.强调句型
with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.介词短语with结构
2.使用连接词 First, Personally, In addition, Finally,使文章条理清晰,层次分明.
3. 引用谚语No pains no gains,使文章更有说服力.