题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的好友John热爱绘画,从小梦想成为—名画家。但他的家人极力反对,他有些犹豫不决,于是写信向你征求建议。请你给他写一封英文回信,要点如下:
1.支持他的梦想;
2.原因(比如:要坚守梦想,画家不一定没有好的收入,绘画是一种高尚的事业等);
3.盼望回复。
注意: 1.词数100左右;2.信的格式和开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family's objections.________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family’s objections. As far as I am concerned, you should stick to your dream and try to become an artist.
For one thing, it has been your dream since you were a child. For another, being an artist doesn’t necessarily mean that you can’t have a stable job or high salary to support yourself. On the contrary, if you try your best, you will be a success artist all over the world. In addition, being an artist is something great, as artists are like bridges that connect human and nature.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇建议类的应用文,文章要点已给出,在写作时应注意以下几点:
通篇应以一般现在时时态为主。
要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。
注意语气。由于该作文是对朋友提出建议,所以用语应该恳切,要采取充分的例子对观点进行支撑,要多用积极性、鼓励性的词汇,以达到本文写作目的。
范文亮点:
范文采取了(as far as my concerned…),(for one thing…for another…)等固定搭配。
文中使用了(stick to do sth.),(on the contrary),(all over the world),(in addition),(look forward to doing )等高分短语。