题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”活动。你们班为此要组织一次主题班会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你对创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容:
1.安全意识的重要性;
2.在校内要注意人身安全;
3.运动时要注意安全;
4.同学之间发生矛盾时,一定要保持冷静、理智。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My dear classmates,
There is no denying that safety play an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.____________________________________________________
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【答案】My dear classmates,
There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.
I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.
As far as I'm concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the "safety at school" activity in mind. Besides, we are supposed to observe the law discipline where we are at any moment.
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求根据学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”活动,你们班为此要组织一次主题班会,请用英语写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你对创建“平安校园”的一些想法。要点包括:1.安全意识的重要性;2.在校内要注意人身安全;3.运动时要注意安全;4.同学之间发生矛盾时,一定要保持冷静、理智。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了There is no denying that句型;定语从句which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life,宾语从句that safety should always come first in our daily life, 和which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. Aim at, play an important part in ,attach to,supposed to 等词汇及 Furthermore, As far as I'm concerned, Besides等连接词。