题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你喜爱的英语学习报 Colorful English 创刊五周年之际征集读者意见,请你根据以下内容给主编写封信,主要包括:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者
2. 说明该报优点:1)刊登国际新闻 2)提供音频二维码
3. 提出建议:增加外国文学欣赏
注意: 1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 周年 anniversary 二维码 QR code
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
LiHua
【答案】Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Colorful English!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.
There are many advantages of Colorful English. Firstly, it covers various international news with selection of good words and sentences. By simply turning the pages, I can both know important things that have happened in the world and increase my vocabulary. Besides, it is also helpful to get audio resources through scanning QR codes.
Eager to know more about English culture, I suggest that Colorful English provide introduction and appreciation of foreign literature works.
Finally, I hope that Colorful English will become more and more popular.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给主编写封信向英语学习报 Colorful English提一些意见。
第一步: 审题
体裁: 应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构: 总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者
2. 说明该报优点:1)刊登国际新闻 2)提供音频二维码
3. 提出建议:增加外国文学欣赏
第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)
advantages of;eager to;look forward to
第三步: 连词成句
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Colorful English!
I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.
There are many advantages of Colorful English.
Firstly, it covers various international news with selection of good words and sentences.
By simply turning the pages, I can both know important things that have happened in the world and increase my vocabulary.
Besides, it is also helpful to get audio resources through scanning QR codes.
Eager to know more about English culture, I suggest that Colorful English provide introduction and appreciation of foreign literature works.
Finally, I hope that Colorful English will become more and more popular.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步: 润色修改