Question

12．假设某旅行社招聘驻San Francisco兼职导游，请根据以下信息写一份求职信
注意：词数 100 左右；可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯；
已给的开头结尾不计入词数

姓名	李明	年龄	25		国籍		中国
经历	旧金山留学3年，曾担任当地博物馆志愿者
技能	•英语口语流利，懂一些日语、法语； •（自拟一项）			电话		0513-33750

Dear Sunshine Travel Agency，
I would like to apply to be a part-time tour guide you are looking for．
My name is Li Ming，a 25-year-old Chinese．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．I also acquire a good knowledge of the multiculture and history of the city owing to my volunteer experience at the local museum．
In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．Meanwhile，I work well under pressure．
I believe that I have the qualifications you expect for the job．I would be grateful if you would consider employing me．My phone number is 0513-33750．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一份求职信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表明书信目的；二介绍自己的技能和工作经历；三写明自己的电话，期盼得到答复．高分句型：1．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．句子里Having studied here for 3 years是现在分词的完成式做原因状语，表示"已经在这里学习三年了"；am familiar with 表示"熟悉…"．已经在这里学习三年了，所以我对旧金山著名的旅游景点很熟悉．2..In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．句子里In terms of表示"就…而言"；oral English表示"口语"；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句；enables表示"使能够"；communicate with表示"和…交流"．说道做导游的技能，我英语的口语很好，还能说一点日语和法语，再加上我的母语，这些会使我自信能够和来自不同地方的人交流．

解答 Dear Sunshine Travel Agency，
   I would like to apply to be a part-time tour guide you are looking for．（表明书信目的）
   My name is Li Ming，a 25-year-old Chinese．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．【高分句型一】I also acquire a good knowledge of the multiculture and history of the city owing to my volunteer experience at the local museum．In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．【高分句型二】Meanwhile，I work well under pressure．（介绍自己的技能和工作经历）
    I believe that I have the qualifications you expect for the job．I would be grateful if you would consider employing me．My phone number is 0513-33750．（写明自己的电话，期盼得到答复）
                                                               Yours，
                                                              Li Ming

点评 考查图表类作文．写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．