假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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1．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
This is the first time that I had been away from home，so I find it hard to live here．How I wish I could turn to Lucy，who once gave me much help!I had trouble with my study in Grade 9．So frustrating was I that I began to play computer games after school，when I should have paid more attention to catch up with others．Beside，I was even caught cheating in the exam，it worried my parents a lot．When asking about the reason why I fell far behind，I was too guilty to say a word．It was then Lucy came to my help，telling me not to give up．To my amazement，I made a great progress．Finally，I even became one of the top student in my class．I must say thanks to Lucy，without her help I could never have had such good grades．

分析作者第一次离开家，觉得不能适应新生活．这时他想到了在他上九年级时的老师Lucy，在那时，作者沉迷电脑游戏，考试作弊，父母很担心他，而Lucy给予他及时的帮助，他取得了很大的进步，成为最好的学生之一．

解答 This is the first time that I had been away from home，so I find it hard to live here．How I wish I could turn to Lucy，who once gave me much help!I had trouble with my study in Grade 9．So  frustrating was I that I began to play computer games after school，when I should have paid more  attention to catch up with others．Beside，I was even caught cheating in the exam，it worried my  parents a lot．When asking about the reason why I fell far behind，I was too guilty to say a word．It was then∧Lucy came to my help，telling me not to give up．To my amazement，I made a great progress．Finally，I even became one of the top student in my class．I must say thanks to Lucy，without her help I could never have had such good grades．
解析：
1．had---have．考查固定句式．表示"某人第一次做某事"用固定结构This is the first time that+现在完成时态；This was the first time that+过去完成时态．本句的主句是前者，所以从句的谓语动词用have been．
2．frustrating---frustrated．考查形容词辨析．做表语，修饰主语I，用frustrated表示"沮丧的"．
3．catch---catching．考查非谓语动词．固定短语pay  attention to 里的to是介词，所以用动名词catching做宾语．
4．Beside---Besides．考查形式相似的单词辨析．Beside表示"在…旁边"；Besides表示"除了，此外"．本句表示"此外，我被捉住考试作弊"，所以用Besides．
5．it---which．．考查定语从句．I was even caught cheating in the exam和it worried my  parents a lot之间是逗号，所以应该构成主从复合句，因此应该用关系代词which代指主句，表示"这一件事"，it只是一个普通代词不能引导非限制性定语从句．
6．asking---asked．考查非谓语动词．做时间状语，和主语I之间是被动关系，用过去分词asked，表示"当被问到原因的时候"．
7．then后加that．考查强调句式．本句可以写成then Lucy came to my help，因此可以看出这是强调时间状语then 的强调句式，所以then后加that，和It was 构成强调句式．
8．去掉a．考查冠词．progress表示"进步"是不可数名词，所以去掉a．
9．student---students．考查名词．根据修饰词one of the top，可知表示"最好的学生之一"，所以用可数名词复数students．
10．her---whose．考查定语从句的关系词．I must say thanks to Lucy和without her help I could never have had such good grades．两句之间是逗号，所以应该是主从复合句的关系，因此用关系词whose代指 Lucy's．her只是普通的物主代词，不能连接定语从句．

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答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．

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12．假设某旅行社招聘驻San Francisco兼职导游，请根据以下信息写一份求职信
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姓名	李明	年龄	25		国籍		中国
经历	旧金山留学3年，曾担任当地博物馆志愿者
技能	•英语口语流利，懂一些日语、法语； •（自拟一项）			电话		0513-33750

Dear Sunshine Travel Agency，
I would like to apply to be a part-time tour guide you are looking for．
My name is Li Ming，a 25-year-old Chinese．Having studied here for 3 years，I am familiar with the famous tourist spots in San Francisco．I also acquire a good knowledge of the multiculture and history of the city owing to my volunteer experience at the local museum．
In terms of the skills for a tour guide，I'm good at oral English and I can speak a little Japanese and French，which，together with my mother tongue，enables me to communicate with people from different places confidently．Meanwhile，I work well under pressure．
I believe that I have the qualifications you expect for the job．I would be grateful if you would consider employing me．My phone number is 0513-33750．
Yours，
Li Ming．

9．Swedish businessman Nile Bergqvist is delighted with his new hotel，the world's first igloo （冰屋）hotel．（61）Built（build） in a small town in Lapland，it has been attracting lots of visitors，but soon the fun will be over．
In two weeks'time Bergqvist's ice creation will be nothing more than a pool of water．"We don't see it as a big problem，"he says．"We just look forward to （62）replacing（replace） it．"
Bergqvist built his first igloo in 1991 for an art exhibition．It was （63）sosuccessful that he designed the present one，（64）whichmeasures roughly 200 square meters．Six workmen spent more than eight weeks （65）piling（pile） 1，000 tons of snow onto a wooden base； when the snow froze，（66）the　　
base was removed．
After their stay，all visitors receive a survival certificate recording （67）theirsuccess．With no windows，nowhere to hang clothes and temperatures below 0℃，it may seem more like a survival test （68）thana relaxing hotel break．"It's great fun，"Bergqvist explains，"as well as a good start in survival training．"
The （69）popularity（popular） of the igloo is beyond doubt：it is now attracting tourists from all over the world．At least 800 people have stayed at the igloo this season even though there are only 10 rooms．"You can get a lot of people in，"explains Bergqvist．"The beds are three meters wide by two meters long，and can fit at least four （70）ata time．"

16．Every year in America，high-school students who want to go on to college take a national examination called the Scholastic Aptitude Test，or SAT in a shortened way．Their score is an important factor in determining which colleges will admit them．The Scholastic Aptitude Test measures one's mathematical ability and use of the English language．Traditionally，the English part involved grammatical questions and paragraphs that test reading comprehension．
But the SAT folks have added a single question to be answered in an essay，handwritten on the spot．That's an interesting way to test writing ability，but content aside，have you ever seen young people's handwriting lately？Or anyone's for that matter，in this age of computer keyboards？Students write numbers and sign their names on bank checks．They scribble class notes in what can generously be described as the written word．
Yet today's kids are asked to write，thoughtfully and clearly，for several minutes on this SAT Test．Good luck to the text scorers who must work out difficultly the scrawl（潦草的笔迹） of young people who've been typing on computers since the age of three!Teachers insist that good handwriting can not only help one's score on the SAT，but also，later on in life，impress potential employers．And don't forget，we all have to use handwriting from time to time，as computers go down when the power goes out．
Then how to improve the handwriting？Well，with a few simple steps you can improve your handwriting．
Position the pen，you should hold the pen between the forefinger and the thumb．You should then rest it near the first knuckle（指节） of the middle finger．The rest of your fingers should be curled（卷曲）under your hand and your hand should remain relaxed．
Evaluate your writing．What do you like and what you don't like about the way you write？Make changes to your letters till you like how they look．
Take your time．Make sure that，while you are writing，you take your time．Speed is sure to make your writing messy-looking．If it is worth writing well，then take your time．
Practice．Practice it a lot； it's not enough to do it once and hope for the best．It has to be something you work at to make great improvements．
32．The SAT tests students onB．
A．math，English，reading and writing．
B．math，grammar，reading and handwriting．
C．math，foreign languages and writing．
D．math，foreign languages and handwriting．
33．According to the text，good handwriting canD．
A．help students pass the test．
B．make a student more popular．
C．show students'ability．
D．assist students in getting a job．
34．Which of the following should you avoid when improving your handwriting？B
A．Practicing writing a lot．
B．Writing as fast as you can．
C．relaxing your hand when holding the pen．
D．changing your letters till you like how they look．
35．The text is to present the fact thatC．
A．writing seems to be very important in the SAT
B．those who will go to college have to take the SAT
C．students should practice handwriting more often
D．kids don't know how to write in the computer age．

6．You might have already read up on how to be cool，but you might be wondering：how I ap ply that in school．（36）D1．Get clean．One of the easiest things you can do for your popularity is staying fresh and smelling good．Take showers regularly，and brush your teeth．（37）FYou'll look more attractive，whether you're a guy or a girl，too．
2．（38）BTake a few minutes in the morning to style your hair however you think it looks best．If you don't like your hair currently，get it cut．Your hairstylist will be able to tell you what kind of cut will look good with the shape of your face．
3．Pay attention to your clothes．Make sure you walk out of the door with a look you know you like．Are your clothes clean？Do they match？（39）EYou just have to be confident and the rest of the world may just be fooled．
4．Let your personality shine through your look．（40）AYour own sense of style will attract schoolmates who also have their own sense of style．

A．Care about your own personality-not about being a follower．
B．Style your hair every day．
C．Get your hair cut regularly．
D．It is easier than you ever imagined．
E．Make sure you feel confident in them．
F．It's also necessary to wash your face regularly．
G．Being cool is also about being a leader，actually．

13．A food additive is any substance that is added to food．Many people are put off by the idea of"chemicals in food"．The truth is that all food is made up of chemicals．Natural substances like milk，as well as man-made ones like drinks on sale in the market，can be described by chemical formulas．Some chemical substances are indeed harmful，but a person who refused to consume any chemicals would find nothing to eat．
The things we eat can be divided into natural and man-made substances．Some people feel that only natural foods are healthy and that all man-made ingredients are to be avoided．But many natural chemicals，found in plants and animals，are harmful when eaten，and some laboratory-made substances increase the nutritional value of food．Other chemicals have natural and man-made forms that are exactly alike：Vitamin C is Vitamin C，whether it comes from a test tube or from an orange．Like"chemical"，"man-made"doesn't necessarily mean"not fit to eat"．?
Food additives are used for many reasons．We add sugar and salt and other things to foods we prepare at home to make them taste better．Food producers have developed a range of additives that stabilize，thicken，harden，keep dry，keep wet，keep firm，or improve the appearance of their products．Additives can make food more convenient or nutritious，give it a longer shelf life，and make it more attractive to the consumer，thus increasing the sales and profits of the producers．?
Food additives are presently the centre of a storm of serious argument．Food producers have been known to use additives that have not been proved safe； some substances in common use have been proved unsafe and have been taken off the market．Many people feel there's a risk of eating food to which anything has been added．But food additives are now regulated by the FDA of the federal government，and new additives are subjected to strict testing before they can be placed on the market．For most people，the chances of developing serious side effects from the long-term use of presently approved food additives are very slim．?

32．From the passage we can learn thatA．?
A．all foods consist of chemical substances
B．it is right to reject chemicals in food
C．food additives are harmful to our health
D．natural foods are much safer than man-made ones
33．Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage？D
A．Foods with more additives have higher nutritional value．?
B．To ensure food safety，the FDA will ban food additives．?
C．Foods free of additives can keep a much longer shelf life．?
D．Food additives can improve the quality of foods in many ways．?
34．We can infer from the regulation to the food addiives by the FDA thatD．
A．new additives will be approved more easily than before
B．food producers won't be allowed to use new food additives
C．food with common-used additives will be taken off the market
D．food additives will be used in a safer and more scientific way
35．According to the writer，the food additive isB．?
A．unpredictable
B．acceptable
C．poisonous
D．avoidable．

10．In general，people talk about two groups of colors：warm colors and cool colors．The warm colors are red，orange，and yellow．Where there are warm colors and a lot of light，people usually want to be active．The cool colors are green，blue，and violet．These colors，unlike warm colors，are relaxing．Where there are cool colors，people are usually quiet．People who like to spend time alone often prefer blue．
Red may be exciting，but one researcher says that time seems to pass more slowly in a room with warm colors than in a room with cool colors．He suggests that a warm color，such as red or orange，is a good color for a living room or restaurant．People who are relaxing or eating，do not want time to pass quickly．Cool colors are better for offices or factories if the people who are working there want time to pass quickly．
Perhaps warm colors remind people of warm days and the cool colors remind them of cool days．People associate colors with different objects，feelings，and holidays．People say red is an exciting and active color．They associate red with a strong feeling like anger．Red is used for signs of danger，such as STOP signs and fire engines．The holiday which is associated with red is Valentine's Day．Orange is the bright，warm color of leaves in autumn．People say orange is a lively，energetic color．They associate orange with happiness．The holidays which are associated with orange are Halloween in October and Thanksgiving Day in November．White is the color of snow．People describe white as a pure，clean color．They associate white with a bright clean feeling．On the other hand，black is the color of night．People wear black clothes at serious or formal ceremonies．Yellow is the color of sunlight．People say it is a cheerful and lively color．Green is the cool color of grass in spring．People say it is a refreshing and relaxing color．Machines in factories are usually painted light green．Blue is the color of the sky，water，and ice．Police and Navy uniforms are blue．When people are sad，they say"I feel blue．"They associate blue with feelings like unhappiness and fear．
If two objects are the same except for color，they will look different．Color can make an object look nearer or farther，larger or smaller．Bright objects look larger than dark objects．In conclusion，color is very important to people．Warm and cool colors affect how people feel．People choose products by color．Moreover，color affects how an object looks．It is even possible that your favorite color tells a lot about you．
32．The people who prefer warm colors usually areB．
A．quiet
B．energetic
C．angry
D．relaxing
33．The fact that one family paints the living room a sunny yellow suggestsC．
A．people want to be quiet
B．people want to sleep slowly
C．people want time to pass more slowly
D．people associate colors with holidays
34．Why do doctors and nurses normally wear white uniforms？A
A．Because white means pure and clean．
B．Because white means serious or formal．
C．Because they like the colour of snow．
D．Because they like wearing uniforms．
35．We may learn from the text that fat people who want to look slimmer should  wearB clothes．
A．blue
B．dark
C．white
D．yellow．

11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My name is Li Hua．I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province on February 1995．I started the school in 2001 when I was six．I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007．After that I went to No.39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer．The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer．I like English and computer best but I am very good at it．Last year I wined the first prize in the school computer competition．In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp．My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter．

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