题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的朋友张明来信说他进入高中后发现英语听力理解比较困难,向你寻求帮助。请你用英语给他回信并提供几点建议。主要要点如下:
1. 常听英语对话;
2. 看CCTV9;
3. 听英文歌曲。
注意:1. 词数100左右;开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信件中不能出现真实姓名和地址;
参考词汇:对话dialogue
Dear Zhang Ming,
It’s nice to hear from you. I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in English listening comprehension.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Zhang Ming,
It’s nice to hear from you. I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in English listening comprehension . However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help.
Firstly, as far as I am concerned, you should listen to English dialogues spoken by native speakers frequently. If you do this, you will feel familiar with the English pronunciation and expressions. Secondly, why not watch the news and interviews on CCTV 9? That way, you will get a better knowledge of important events in English. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you listen to English songs. By doing this, I’m sure you’ll find English interesting and make great progress as time goes on.
I hope you’ll find the suggestions useful. Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作,要求考生写一封信,在信件中写明:提高英语听力理解的建议——常听英语对话;看CCTV9;听英文歌曲。
第一步:审题
体裁:一般性应用文——书信
格式:格式是书信,要写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,还要有结尾语
要点:要包括二个要点——1.对他感觉英语听力理解困难表示同情并给予能解决问题的信心;2.提高英语听力理解的建议:常听英语对话;看CCTV9;听英文歌曲。
结构:总分总法
第二步:列提纲(重点短语和词汇)
trouble ;listening comprehension; take one’s advice; tip; dialogue; be familiar with; news; interviews ;English songs; progress
第三步:连词成句
I know that you are having trouble in English listening comprehension . I believe the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
You should listen to English dialogues frequently.
You could watch the news and interviews on CCTV 9.
Also , you could listen to English songs as often as possible .
I am sure you’ll improve your English listening comprehension soon .
第四步:连句成篇
第五步:润色修改