题目内容
【题目】你是北京第20中学的一名学生。请根据下面图画写一篇题为"My Colorful School Life"短文。
要求:1. 短文应包括图画的全部内容; 禁止使用数字符号,注意使用第一人称。
2. 要紧扣主题,适当发挥,使句子表达流畅;注意使用正确时态;
3. 词数100个左右。开头结尾已给。
My Colorful School Life
I’m a student from
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I enjoy my colorful school life.
【答案】
My Colorful School Life
I’m a student from Beijing No.20 Middle School and I know what I’m studying for so that I work hard and listen carefully and attentively at school.
After class or during the breaks, I often play basketball with my classmates, which makes me happy, energetic and healthy. Besides, I like the computer class very much because we can surf the Internet and get more information at home and abroad.
I go to the library regularly and spend some time there reading various books. I am really interested in visiting museums where I have learned a lot of knowledge beyond school books.
I enjoy my colorful school life.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇图片作文。根据图片内容和要求,以“我的丰富多彩的校园生活”为主题描述一些我在校园内的丰富多彩的生活内容,图片已经给出我们三点提示,要求我们自己适当发挥,再写出一条。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式、词汇及短语,为文章增色不少。如:regularly定期地、listen carefully and attentively认真地听和专注、learned a lot of knowledge学到很多知识以及定语从句which makes me happy, energetic and healthy.的使用。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。