题目内容
8.假如你的名字叫张勇,你的美国笔友John想了解你进入高中后的英语课外阅读情况.请你根据下面提示,给他回一封电子邮件.阅读现状 | 以英文报纸为主; 偶尔简单的故事书…;几乎没有经典类的英语读物 |
原因分析 | 1.阅读时间少; 2.没有养成阅读英语的习惯; 3.词汇量小,认为经典类太难,没有尝试或不感兴趣… |
未来打算 | … |
1.根据所给提示,适当发挥,要求内容充实,语意连贯.
2.词数120-150.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.
英语课外阅读:English extracurricular reading;经典英语读物:classic English books.
Dear John,
Thank you for your email.Now I would like to tell you something about my English reading in senior high school.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yong.
分析 本文是一个表格式的作文,根据表格提供的内容文章可写成三段式.第一段描述阅读的现状,第二段分析造成现状的原因,第三段针对以上内容提出的解决措施.要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子,然后根据文章的中心话题和要求,把这些要点连句成文.本文是一封书信,人称是第一人称,时态用一般现在时,衔接用了first,besides,lastly等非常得当.
亮点句型一:First,since entering senior high school,I have been burdened with so much homework that my reading time is very limited.首先,自从进入高中,我一直背负着这么多的作业,我的阅读时间是非常有限的.本句型中在"such…that…"句型中,such修饰名词,意思也是"如此…以致于…"但当名词前有many、much、(a) few、(a) little等词修饰时,句子中要用"so…that…"而不能用"such…that…".
亮点句型二:I think the classic English books are too difficult to understand and so I even haven't had a try.我认为经典的英文书太难理解了,所以我甚至没有尝试过.
too+形容词或者副词+to+动词原形,其意为"太…以致于…".
解答 Dear John,
Thank you for your email.Now I would like to tell you something about my English extracurricular reading in senior high school.Usually I am only asked to read some newspapers.Sometimes I just read some simple English stories or magazines to relax myself.But I have never read classic English books.【阅读现状】
Do you know why?The reasons are as followed.First,since entering senior high school,I have been burdened with so much homework that my reading time is very limited.(亮点句型一) Besides,I haven't formed a habit of reading English.Lastly,the number of the English words I have mastered is less than 3000.I think the classic English books are too difficult to understand and so I even haven't had a try.(亮点句型二)【分析原因】
However,reading is important for our English learning.It can not only enlarge our English vocabulary but show us a colorful world.Especially it helps us to think better in English and learn English better.So I decide to read English widely,ranging from simple English stories to classic English books.【未来打算】
点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
赞成的理由 | 反对的理由 | 你的看法 |
1.对外语学习有利 2.了解不同国家文化 3.学会独立 | 中学生自控力差 易做错事 学费过高 | ? |
Recent years,more and more Chinese high school students have chosen to study abroad.
How has this speed of communication changed the world?To many people,the world has become smaller.Of course this does not mean that the world is actually physically smaller.It means that the world seems smaller.Two hundred years ago,communication between the continents took a long time.All news was carried on ships that took weeks or even months to cross the ocean.In the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries,it took six weeks for news from Europe to reach America.This time difference influenced people's actions.For example,one battle,or fight,in the War of 1812 between England and the United States could have been avoided.A peace agreement had already been signed.Peace was made in England,but the news of peace took six weeks to reach America.During these six weeks,the large and serious Battle of New Orleans was fought.Many people lost their lives after a peace treaty (条约)had been signed.In the past,communication took much more time than it does now.
There was a good reason why the world seemed so much larger than it does today.
Title:The World Is Getting(76)smaller | |
Theme | It becomes easy for people to (77)communicatewith each other because of television,telephone,radio,telegraph and the Internet. |
Ideas and news of events spread quickly (78)throughoutthe world. | |
Examples (nowadays) | People can know the results of an election being (79)heldin another country within seconds. |
An international football match comes into the homes of everyone with a (80)televisionset. | |
News of a disaster (81)likean earthquake or a flood can bring help from distant countries within hours. | |
Information goes fast (82)dueto modern technology. | |
Examples (in the past) | Two (83)centuries_ago,communication between the continents took a long time. |
The news of peace agreement made in (84)Englandtook six weeks to reach America. | |
Conclusion | Now communication takes (85)lesstime than it did in the past.So the world is getting smaller and smaller. |
家长 | 生活上的照顾 |
学校 | 提供了方便(延长图书馆和教室的开放时间…) |
老师 | 学习上给予的帮助(鼓励,答疑解难…) |
你自己 | 感受和打算,至少两点 |
1.必须包括主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯、完整;
2.词数:120词左右;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数内.
I'm a senior 3student.The college entrance exam is on the wayI'm a senior 3 student.The college entrance exam is on the wayand everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways.At school,all the teachers work very hard,encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study.(高分句型)Whenever we meet with difficulties,they are ready to come to our help.(高分句型)Meanwhile,our school also provides good facilities for us students,for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends.At home,our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy.(高分句型)
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers.I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam.I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future.(高分句型).
原因: | 1.晚上学习太晚,不吃早餐可多睡一会儿; |
2.家长太忙无暇顾及,给钱让孩子自己解决; | |
3.一些女孩子为保持苗条身材而一些男生则为了减肥不吃早餐. | |
结果: | 1.整天昏昏欲睡,记忆力下降; |
2.上课注意力不能集中; | |
3.考试成绩不理想. | |
建议: | 1.早餐不可少,它提供全天所需能量的30%,且有助于创造能力的培养; 2.青少年健康应从早餐抓起. 3.自己的建议(至少2点) |
2.词数:120左右;文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数内.
3.参考词汇:创造能力 creative abilities
A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast.
赞同 | 反对 |
课间忘记,上课后要去属于正常 | 不妥,影响课堂秩序 |
如果不让去,上课也不安心,无法集中注意力听讲. | 影响本人和同学的学习 |
不让去会影响健康 | 应该养成好习惯,学会控制自己 |
个人认为:低年级可以允许,但高年级不应该鼓励 |
2.标题已经给出.
Is it OK to permit students to go to the toilet during class?