题目内容
【题目】Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it. I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”
【答案】第二句 achieve改成achieving;toughly改成tough
第三句 student前加a
第四句 that改成what
第六句 Anxious改成Anxiety
第六句 去掉from
第七句 Besides改成 However
第八句 has改成is
第九句 challenged改成challenging
第十句 said改成says
【解析】
本文为夹叙夹议文。每个人都有梦想。作为一名高三的学生,体会到了紧张和压力。无论道路平坦或崎岖,我们都在通往梦想的路上,我相信我可以实现梦想。因为:有志者事竟成。
1.考查固定搭配。题干中on one's way to表示去某地的路,to是介词,后接名词或动名词。因此第二句 achieve改成achieving。
2.考查形容词做表语。根据the way is smooth or toughly可知,系动词后用形容词作表语和smooth并列,而toughly为副词。句意:不管道路是平坦还是艰难,我们都在实现这一目标。因此toughly改为tough。
3考查冠词。句中的student是可数名词,表示作为一名高三的学生,表示泛指,要用不定冠词a, 故在student 后添加a。
4.考查介词宾语。文中的I have learnt from my teachers是一个句子,做介词with的的宾语从句。从句中learnt缺少宾语,缺少宾语要用连接代词what,因此that改成what。
5.考查名词。分析Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times可知,anxious是和pressure是作并列主语,而anxious是形容词,所以要用名词anxiety。因此句中的 Anxious改成Anxiety。
6. 考查及物动词。句意:焦虑和压力有时使我泄气。句中的discourage是及物动词,不用介词,所以要去掉from。
7.考查连词。句意:焦虑和压力有时使我灰心丧气。但在老师和同学的鼓励下,我想我会克服的。根据语境可知,前后句子逻辑上构成转折关系,而非递进关系。因此把Besides改成 However。
8.考查词组辨析。there be...句型表示客观存在“有”,表示某地有某物。而have/has是指人或有生命的“有”, there be结构中的“be”不能换为“have”。故把has 改为is。
9.考查形容词辨析。分析句子No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true可知,challenged是用来作it的表语的。challenged意为“受到挑战的”; challenging意为“挑战性的”本句意为“无论多么富有挑战性,我都会实现它”。根据句意可知,是富有挑战性的,因此challenged 改为challenging。
10.考谓主谓一致。句意:正如谚语所说:“有志者事竟成”。谚语表示的是客观真理,要用一般现在时态,因此said改成says。