Question

【题目】Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it. I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】第二句 achieve改成achieving；toughly改成tough

第三句 student前加a

第四句 that改成what

第六句 Anxious改成Anxiety

第六句 去掉from

第七句 Besides改成 However

第八句 has改成is

第九句 challenged改成challenging

第十句 said改成says

【解析】

本文为夹叙夹议文。每个人都有梦想。作为一名高三的学生，体会到了紧张和压力。无论道路平坦或崎岖，我们都在通往梦想的路上，我相信我可以实现梦想。因为：有志者事竟成。

1.考查固定搭配。题干中on one's way to表示去某地的路，to是介词，后接名词或动名词。因此第二句 achieve改成achieving。

2.考查形容词做表语。根据the way is smooth or toughly可知，系动词后用形容词作表语和smooth并列，而toughly为副词。句意：不管道路是平坦还是艰难，我们都在实现这一目标。因此toughly改为tough。

3考查冠词。句中的student是可数名词，表示作为一名高三的学生，表示泛指，要用不定冠词a, 故在student 后添加a。

4.考查介词宾语。文中的I have learnt from my teachers是一个句子，做介词with的的宾语从句。从句中learnt缺少宾语，缺少宾语要用连接代词what，因此that改成what。

5.考查名词。分析Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times可知，anxious是和pressure是作并列主语，而anxious是形容词，所以要用名词anxiety。因此句中的 Anxious改成Anxiety。

6. 考查及物动词。句意：焦虑和压力有时使我泄气。句中的discourage是及物动词，不用介词，所以要去掉from。

7.考查连词。句意：焦虑和压力有时使我灰心丧气。但在老师和同学的鼓励下，我想我会克服的。根据语境可知，前后句子逻辑上构成转折关系，而非递进关系。因此把Besides改成 However。

8.考查词组辨析。there be...句型表示客观存在“有”，表示某地有某物。而have/has是指人或有生命的“有”， there be结构中的“be”不能换为“have”。故把has 改为is。

9.考查形容词辨析。分析句子No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true可知，challenged是用来作it的表语的。challenged意为“受到挑战的”； challenging意为“挑战性的”本句意为“无论多么富有挑战性，我都会实现它”。根据句意可知，是富有挑战性的，因此challenged 改为challenging。

10.考谓主谓一致。句意：正如谚语所说：“有志者事竟成”。谚语表示的是客观真理，要用一般现在时态，因此said改成says。