Question

2．假定你是李华，计划高三毕业后的暑假，找份兼职工作．下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信．

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp．I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）．Besides，I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates．More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term．I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，计划高三毕业后的暑假，找份兼职工作．下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be interested in对…感兴趣；To begin with首先；Besides另外；More importantly更重要的是；Look forward to盼望；
I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）
More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp．I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
       To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）．Besides，I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates．More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term．I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．