Question

20．假如你是英国的Mike，你的朋友谢蕾打算到国外留学，她写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐．请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：
1．语言是道硬门槛；
2．适应能力很重要；
3．兴趣爱好被看重；
4．要有社会责任感．
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Xie Lei，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）
This is some of my advice．I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇书信类作文．假如你是英国的Mike，你的朋友谢蕾打算到国外留学，她写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐．请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1．语言是道硬门槛； 2．适应能力很重要； 3．兴趣爱好被看重； 4．要有社会责任感．需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色．注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少．
【亮点说明】I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．包含一个宾语从句；Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．包含了一个表语从句和一个宾语从句；As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course．包含一个非限制性定语从句；Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．包含一个定语从句．
Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）
Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Xie Lei，
      I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
      As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially welcomed．（高分句型三）
       This is some of my advice．I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Mike

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．