Question

【题目】 书面表达

假设你是李华, 你所在的学校最近浪费现象很严重，比如长流水、长明灯等。为此学校向全校师生发出建设“节约型校园”的倡议。请你以How to build an economized campus为题写一篇英语作文，发表在校报英文版上。要求包括以下要点：

1. 认识到节约资源的重要性；

2. 从“我”做起节约资源，及时关掉灯、电扇等；随手关水龙头等；

3. 号召师生共同建设节约型校园。

参考词汇：economized campus节约型校园

注意:

1. 短文词数不少于100字；

2. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

How to build an economized campus

Nowadays, waste on campus has become an increasingly serious problem. ________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to build an economized campus

Nowadays, waste on campus has become an increasingly serious problem. We can often see many students leave the water running and some let the lights on for a long time, which causes a serious waste of resources.

Therefore, it’s high time that we took some measures to deal with the problem. Firstly, we should realize that natural resources are limited. Many parts of our country are suffering from drought and power scarcity. Besides, everyone has the responsibility to preserve natural resources. We should save every piece of paper, every drop of water and turn off the lights when leaving the room. Only through these measures can we hope to build an economized campus.

The small efforts by a single individual may make a huge difference. Let us work together to build an economized campus！

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

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