Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear editor，

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.

Answer 1

【答案】1. I really 前的and→ but

2. anything→ something

3.reason→ reasons

4.去掉as后的it

5.trouble→ troubles

6.where→ which

7.place→ places

8.mostly→ most

9.Take→ Taking

10.do→ to do

【解析】１.句意：对不起我占用了你的宝贵时间，但是我真的想告诉你一些关于―――。此处表示转折关系，故把I really 前的and→ but。

２.句意：我想告诉你一些关于目前一些人养很多宠物的事情。此句是肯定句，故把 anything→ something。

３．句意：因为下面的理由，我越来越认真对待这个问题。下面的理由不止一个，可知名词用复数形式，故把reason→ reasons。

４.固定结构：ａｓ　ｉｓ　ｋｎｏｗｎ　ｔｏ　ａｌｌ，众所周知，故去掉as后的it。

５.句意：众所周知，宠物制造非常大的干扰村民的噪音。此处是ｎｏｉｓｅ做先行词，指物，在后面的限制性定语从句中做主语，ｎｏｉｓｅ是不可数名词，后面的谓语动词用单数形式，根据句意可知句子用一般现在时态，故.把trouble→ troubles 。

６.此处是整个句子做先行词，后面是ｗｈｉｃｈ引导的非限制性定语从句，故把where→ which。

７.句意：很多主人喜欢吧宠物带到公共场所。“公共场所”应该用复数形式，故把.place→ places。

８. 句意：最重要的是―――。此处是形容词最高级，故把mostly→ most。

９.此处是现在分词做时间状语，表主动关系，故把Take→ Taking。

１０.固定搭配：ｅｘｐｅｃｔ　ｓｂ．　ｔｏ　ｄｏ　ｓｔｈ．期盼某人做某事，故do→ to do。