Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你高一学校生活的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.你的学校生活；

2.你的感受；

3.询问他的情况。

注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m very pleased to tell you how I get along with my high school as you want to learn about it. It is going really well.

Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us the all-round development. Apart from the excellent teachers, the public transportation is also convenient. Our school life is busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school that we all enjoy taking part in. I have made many new friends and we often help and learn from each other.

What about you? May your school life be filled with achievements and happiness.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你高一学校生活的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你的学校生活；2.你的感受；3.询问他的情况。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：pleased to tell you（高兴地告诉你）；going really well（真的变好）；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood（位于一个美丽而安静的社区）；Apart from the excellent teachers（除了一些优秀的老师之外）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。