Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When young, I looked forward to my birthday all year. My friends and family made me feel like the most special person in world. The night before my birthday , my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping. They hang balloons on my walls. When I woke up, I was always surprising!

Although my birthday was on a school day, I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates. While I was having my party at our house, my parents were made up lots of fun game to play. When I got old, my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting.

The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday, meaning I had to wait another whole year before it came again.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in后面加the

【2】careful--carefully

【3】hang--hung

【4】surprising--surprised

【5】Although--If

【6】were去掉；

【7】game--games

【8】old--older

【9】I --me

【10】before--after

【解析】

【1】in后面加the 考查冠词。In the world 在世界上；

【2】careful--carefully 考查副词。句意：在我生日之前的晚上，我的父母当我睡觉时小心地搬到我的房间。

【3】hang—hung 考查动词的时态。根据语境可知在叙述过去的事情，故用一般过去时；

【4】surprising—surprised 考查形容词。句意：当我本来时，我很吃惊。Surprised 用来修饰人；

【5】Although--If 考查连词。句意：如果生日在上学时过，我会与同学和老师分享。

【6】were去掉； 考查动词的语态。句意：当我举行聚会时，我的父母编了很多游戏玩。Make up 编造；

【7】game--games 考查名词复数。句意：当我举行聚会时，我的父母编了很多游戏玩。Lots of 后面加可数名词的复数形式。

【8】old--older 考查形容词的比较级。句意：当我长大时，我的父母会让我的朋友和我通宵看电影和聊天。

【9】I --me 考查代词。Let sb do 让某人做某事，用宾格形式；

【10】before—after 考查连词。句意：生日过后最悲伤的日子，意味着我要等待下个生日的来临。

考点 ：短文改错