Question

【题目】假定你是高二学生李华，你在网上看到一个国际中学生组织将举办2017年暑期夏令营并对此很感兴趣。请你给主办方写一封信提出申请，并咨询相关情况。主要内容包括：

1. 申请并介绍个人参营的原因和优势；

2. 咨询夏令营时间及内容安排；

3. 个人最期待的活动。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以适行文连贯；

3.开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I have read your advertisement on the Internet that the Organization of International High School Students is to hold the 2017 Summer Camp._____________________________________

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m writing to apply to join in the Summer Camp as I’ve been longing to take part in international fairs for high school students. In particular, I’m interested in English culture. What’s more, I’ve already got a good knowledge of English customs from the Internet, and I’m eager to make friends with young people throughout the world.

However, I find no detailed information included in your advertisement. I’d like to know when the camp starts and ends exactly. Besides, what special courses and activities are offered for foreign students?

I’m crazy about local folk music, so I hope there would be related courses if possible. Hopefully I would be admitted and your kind attention on my application would be greatly appreciated.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，原文所给观点需要做适当补充，可以用自己的实际情况进行说明，如参加意图方面可以从拓宽视野，增强兴趣，提高英语和自己的能力等方面展开。

我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。