题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,是英国某所学校的交换生,你于2015年10月14日在商店购买的电脑坏了,请你根据下列提示给商店客服写一封信。
主要内容:
1.写作目的;
2.描述具体情况(黑屏,无法使用);
3.建议解决办法(更换或退钱);
注意:1. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2. 词数100左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. _____________________________
_______________________________________________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m writing to complain about the quality of the computer which I purchased from your store on October 14, 2015.
It unexpectedly went wrong a few days after I bought it. The monitor turned out to be a black screen while I was preparing an important report. I tried to restart it according to the instructions, but it still failed to work. Therefore, I’m sure there is something wrong with the computer. I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may return the faulty item for a new one within the next 3 days. Since your store has gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction, I am confident you will process my complaint at your earlier convenience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查半开放作文。本文要求考生以李华的身份给商店写信。因为2015年10月14日在该商店购买的电脑坏了,所以本文要使用第一人称和一般过去时为主的时态。文字提示中只是给出了一个大概的要点提示,很多内容要考生自己添加,这也是本文较难的原因。建议要点如下:1.写作目的:投诉所购买电脑质量太差;2.描述具体情况:黑屏,无法使用;建议解决办法:最好是退货还钱,如果实在不行就换一台新电脑,并要求保证质量;建议文章分成两部分,要点一为第一部分,另外两个要点为第二部分。在写作的时候一定要注意使用多样化的句式,让文章富有变化。同时注意不要出现中国式英语的思维。