Question

【题目】（十二）

孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题。家长抚育孩子的不同态度对他们今后的成长起着至关重要的作用。请观察下面的漫画，根据要求用英文写一篇短文。

要求：（1）描述漫画内容；（2）分析漫画所揭示的问题；（3）提出你的看法。

注意：（1）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；（3）词数120左右；（4）文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：dote on sb 溺爱某人

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Answer 1

【答案】

From the picture, we can see the ways three mothers treat their children separately. One of them becomes very rude to her little son once he behaves badly. The second one, obviously, is a doting mother. She does what she can to satisfy her child. Another mother is keeping her son company, reading a book together. They both look very peaceful and happy.

It is understandable that every parent hopes their children become good. But the proper attitude of parents plays an important part when their children are brought up. We can tell that the first two mothers’ children will probably lack some important qualities when they grow up, and that the third mother’s child is sure to be healthy in mind.

As far as I’m concerned, not only is education of children teachers’ task, but parents should also attach greater importance to it. If children are properly treated when brought up, they will become healthy both physically and psychologically.

【解析】这是一篇看图写作，一般写成三段式，即先写图画内容，然后给出解释，最后给出自己的观点。漫画描写的是三位家长教育孩子的不同方式，描述时注意描写全面，使用正确的英语表达习惯，在保证正确的前提下，多使用复合句。本文开篇就使用了一个状语从句we can see the ways three mothers treat their children separately. The ways 后面接句子，实质上是省略了in which。 第二句One of them becomes very rude to her little son once he behaves badly.使用了条件从句… once …。句式十分灵活多变。第三句使用了副词obviously做插入语。 第四句为一宾语从句She does what she can to satisfy her child. what=something that。第五句Another mother is keeping her son company, reading a book together. 使用正在进行时，并用分词reading 做状语。第二段用一经典句式开头，It is +adj that+句子，不失为一亮点。是七句使用But做为衔接，使文章紧凑。第八句看起来复杂，其实是一宾语从句，使用了and将两个从句连接起来。第八句As far as I’m concerned开头，为必须熟悉的短语。使用了not only…but also,注意否定词在句首时必须使用部分倒装。第八句为条件状语从句，when brought up为一时间状语，完整句型为when they are brought up.本文最大的亮点是句式多变，大量使用从句，并恰当使用了The second，Another和连词but等,使文章条理清晰，结构紧凑。