Question

【题目】（九）

假设你是光明中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了你近期应聘校园电视台记者及其后发生的事情。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。

Answer 1

【答案】

The school TV station advertised for a student reporter last week. I read their advertisement and was quite interested in it. I decided to have a try and went to the interview at the requested time. During the interview, I was confident about myself and answered all the questions raised by the teachers. They were satisfied with me. I got the job and started the work at once. Last week I interviewed some American visiting students and edited a programme about it. Our programme was broadcast on the school television. Seeing my classmates attracted by our programme, I felt so happy and proud of what I had done.

【解析】

【试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。看图式作文一般有两类文体：记叙文和夹叙夹议文。很明显这篇看图作文是记叙文，那么要求学生充分理解，描写出图画所展示的整个细节和过程。而题目已告知“下面四幅图描述了你近期应聘校园电视台记者及其后发生的事情”，这已经为考生降低了难度。知道了图画的主要内容后，还需要做的就是理清图画的先后顺序，分析每副图画所表达的主要意思。就这篇作文来说，第一幅图主要表示主人公看到学校宣传栏有一则招学生记者的广告；第二幅图表示主人公去参加记者面试；第三幅图主人公作为记者在采访一些参观的学生；第四副主要是主人公采访的节目在学校播出，很多同学在看，主人公看着露出了高兴自豪的笑容。当然，考生需要做适当的补充来使得这些内容更连贯，文章表达更完整。要求：请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。

【亮点说明】该范文依据图画顺序，既突出了每幅图的主要内容又增加了一些细节，充分展示了四幅图所表达意思。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: Seeing my classmates attracted by our programme, I felt so happy and proud of what I had done. 非谓语分句结构；还采用了一些比较好的短语，正确地加以运用：was quite interested in对……感兴趣，I was confident about自信，were satisfied with对……很满意，proud of自豪、骄傲；如这些都给文章带来了亮点。