Question

【题目】（十二）

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。

1、 家庭

2、工作

3、 业余生活

注意：1、次数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3. 开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，这是一篇半开放式的书面表达。短文应该用一般将来时，第一人称。词数100左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：get along well with my colleagues 、what my life will be like，in a word ，much richer and more colorful等都很不错。

亮点是：

1.开门见山，条理清晰，先谈家庭，后谈工作，最后谈及业余生活；

2.简单句，复合句，并列句交替使用，长短结合，错落有致；

3.首尾照应，升华主题。