2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

[参考范文]

    We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

    Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

Passage 4

(08·江西)

学校计划举行英语作文竞赛,主题为“We need Advice from Older Generations”。请根据下列要求写一篇作文:

   你遇到了困难或问题,不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点:

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