1.总体评价：文章要点齐全，语言连贯得体，运用了不少的高级短语句型，虽有些错误，但仍然可按照第四档给分。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Thank you for your listening!

[学生习作]

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Only by listening to others sincerely can we show respect and promote understanding, (-1分)①both of which are the key to building a good interpersonal relationship.

As we know, quarrels seem not to be got rid of between parents and their children. So parents should listen to the teenagers to understand them and narrow the generation gap. When it comes to teachers, they should listen to their students more often. (-2分)②Above all, every student needs guidance in both study and practical life. There is no doubt that teachers can meet their needs in time if they know exactly what’s on the students’ mind. Students should listen more to each other. (-2分)③Not only it can develop the friendship but also they can learn from each other.

Personally, during listening, it’s impolite to interrupt the other as you like. Instead, you can ask him in proper time to show you are interested. What’s more, keep smiling to him or her if possible.

Thank you for your listening! (得分档次：第五档20分)

[习作评析]

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

4.一旦出现早期网瘾迹象，应及时停止操作并休息。

注意：1对所给要点，不要简单翻译；2.词数150左右 3. 参考词汇：网瘾 Internet addiction

　　　 Email的首尾两句已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

After reading your email on the newspaper, I know you are suffering bitterly from the Internet addiction.

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I hope you can get out of Internet addiction soon.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Tom

三)演讲稿

高考演讲稿以发言稿为主。发言稿总是以第一人称的口吻写，开头往往有称呼语，如“Boys and girls”, 或问候语，如 “Good morning/afternoon!”演讲稿的文字。

演讲稿必须注意格式，即：称呼；问候；介绍；表述心情和谢意；介绍演讲的标题；演讲的内容；再次表示感谢。

[真题体验]

(2008江苏卷)实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

注意：1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

3.平时丰富业余生活，比如和朋友聊天、散步、参加体育锻炼等；

2.上网时，光线要亮，保护好眼睛；

1.限制上网时间，特别是夜间上网时间不宜过长；

8.假设你是Tom,《21世纪英语》报最近收到Peter的email，他在里面倾诉了自己为网瘾所困的烦恼，请根据以下要点做出回复提出建议。

3.画龙点睛：划线的部分句式比较单调，可以考虑合为一句，运用分词结构。Some of them are very interested in medicine，hoping to relieve more patients of their suffering one day.

[范文]

Dear Liming,

I feel sorry for the dilemma you are facing. In my opinion, if you weigh up the pros and cons of your idea and your parents’, you will find your parents’ makes much more sense. Among my classmates, many choose science, such as chemistry and biology, just because science can provide more and better job opportunities than arts in the long run. Admittedly, some choose their electives on the basis of interest, saying they can enjoy what they are doing. But we may lose interest in what we always enjoy doing one day. Therefore, we cannot fully rely on interest to lead our way. You know the saying that it is no use doing what you like and you have got to like what you do. So it’s my sincere hope that you might just as well follow your parents’ opinion.　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,

Lihua

[即学即练]

2.误点点拨：① 此处应改为：there is no denying that your interest comes first. There is no doing为固定句型结构。

②in my opinion应改为As for me。in my opinion之后跟的应该是观点、意见之类的

句子，而不应该是一个事实。

③此处应改为：You often get twice the result with half of the effort. 这是倍数表达法的错误运用。