摘要：画龙点睛:划线的部分句式比较单调.可以考虑合为一句.运用分词结构.Some of them are very interested in medicine.hoping to relieve more patients of their suffering one day. [范文] Dear Liming, I feel sorry for the dilemma you are facing. In my opinion, if you weigh up the pros and cons of your idea and your parents’, you will find your parents’ makes much more sense. Among my classmates, many choose science, such as chemistry and biology, just because science can provide more and better job opportunities than arts in the long run. Admittedly, some choose their electives on the basis of interest, saying they can enjoy what they are doing. But we may lose interest in what we always enjoy doing one day. Therefore, we cannot fully rely on interest to lead our way. You know the saying that it is no use doing what you like and you have got to like what you do. So it’s my sincere hope that you might just as well follow your parents’ opinion. Yours, Lihua [即学即练]

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