1. 黄山占地250平方公里，其中154平方公里是风景点；

2.假如你是王林，你正在黄山度假。黄山美丽的风景深深吸引着你，请根据以下要点写一封email给你的朋友李军，描述自己的所见。

3.画龙点睛：第二段的倒数第三、四句比较松散，可改为with结构的句型：Furthermore, 　with Qinling Mountains to the south and the Weihe River to the north, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills.

[范文]

Dear Peter,

　 I am very glad to tell you about my trip in Xian, the capital city of Shanxi province. What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history. First, as is known to the world, Xian has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization. The cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites, help Xian enjoy the title of‘Natural History Museum’. Just take Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses for example. It is praised as‘the eighth major miracle of the world’. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills, for example, to the north of the city stands the Qinling Mountains and to the north lies the Weihe River. I have also climbed Mountain Huashan, one of the five best-known mountains in China, which is famous for its breath-taking cliffs and its unique characteristics.

It is really worth your visiting. I look forward to your coming.

Yours,

Liming

[即学即练]

2.误点点拨：①处It改为There, There is no denying..., 固定句型，“不可否认……”。

　　　　　　 ②处not mention改为not to mention, 固定句型，“不用提”。

1.总体评价：结构完整，思路清晰，短文字里行间反映了描写地点类说明文的基本格式和要求。文章分为两部分来介绍西安，即第二句中所说的风景和历史古迹，条理很清楚。短文运用了不少高级句型和短语，如：a feast to your eyes，at the first sight，no wonder that, be regarded as,分词短语结构等等使文章语言地道而丰富。要注意的是固定句型要记牢。

3.参考词汇：秦始皇兵马俑 Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses 起源地 origin 文明 civilization

[学生习作]

Dear Peter,

　 I am very glad to tell you about my trip in Xian, the capital city of Shanxi province. Its beautiful scenery is really a feast to your eyes and its long history has impressed me so much. (-2分)①It is no denying that Xian is the origin of Chinese civilization. Maybe 'the eighth major miracle of the world' alone, Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses, is enough to explain why it enjoys the title of‘Natural History Museum’, (-2分)②not mention others numerous historical sites, such as Famen Temple and the City Wall of the Ming Dynasty and so on. Furthermore, Qinling Mountains stands to the south and the Weihe River lies to the north. It is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills. Mountain Huashan in particular makes me love it at the first sight with its breath-taking cliffs and unique characteristics. No wonder that it is regarded as one of the five best-known mountains in China.

Xian is really worth your visiting. I look forward to your coming.(得分档次：第四档，21分)

Yours,

Liming

[习作评析]

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

15. You’ll see(find)it

[例题体验]

假如你是李明，你正在陕西省会西安旅游。你的朋友Peter发来email, 让你介绍一下当地情况。请根据下表所提供的要点作出回复，并希望他也能来此旅游。

注意：1.词数150左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好(不记入总词数)。

14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.

13. Take the first turning on your left. (take the path which crosses the river.))