摘要：画龙点睛:第二段的倒数第三.四句比较松散.可改为with结构的句型:Furthermore, with Qinling Mountains to the south and the Weihe River to the north, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills. [范文] Dear Peter, I am very glad to tell you about my trip in Xian, the capital city of Shanxi province. What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history. First, as is known to the world, Xian has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization. The cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites, help Xian enjoy the title of`Natural History Museum’. Just take Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses for example. It is praised as`the eighth major miracle of the world’. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills, for example, to the north of the city stands the Qinling Mountains and to the north lies the Weihe River. I have also climbed Mountain Huashan, one of the five best-known mountains in China, which is famous for its breath-taking cliffs and its unique characteristics. It is really worth your visiting. I look forward to your coming. Yours, Liming [即学即练]

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