短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线(－)，并在该词下面写出修改的词．

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My summer travel started terribly．I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou．I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday．I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it．Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on．It felt very strange to travel without any luggages．When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes．I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last．

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I'm written to make the complaint about the poor quality of a computer that I bought from your company．

　　Frankly spoken, this brand had always been my favorite．In October 1st, 2009, I bought the computer from one of your chain store located in Zhongguancun．It operates well first, so ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me?it always turned off automatically．Its poor quality ruined almost all his previous impression towards your products．

　　The problem is so terrible that 1 strong request full amount of refund or a new computer．

　　I would appreciate it all your assistance in this matter．If you have any questions, please don't hesitate contact me．Looking forward to your reply．

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

短文改错

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　"Ten steps from the gate and twenty steps from rose bushes," A man spoke at a low voice in Jimmy’s dream one night．"There is treasure there!" So the next day Jimmy began dig．He dug before the hole was not any deeper and the dirt pile was at its highest．He sighed, "I’m very tired to dig anymore．" Then he discovered anything．It was a dog bone．He thought, "That man lied to me!" But when Jimmy’s mother saw what he has done, she clapped with her hands and smiled．

　　"Oh, thank you, Jimmy．I always wanted another rose bush planting just there．Here’s ＄5.00 with digging that hole．"

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park．Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have planted all over．Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a new look．

短文改错

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine．In my mind, he is someone interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis．Besides, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time．With such pen friend, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care pets, or whichever we have in common．I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

　　Best regards,

Li Hua

短文改错

Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life．With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth．Thus, man's changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results．Today, pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet．Like we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even formed a great threat to man's existence．Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment．Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings．