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短文改错

Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth.Thus, man's changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet.Like we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even formed a great threat to man's existence.Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment.Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.

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解析:

  答案:第一行:their改为his;

  第二行:that去掉;thus改为however;

  第三行:has改为have; the去掉;a改为an;

  第四行:like改为as; in改为about;

  第六行:pass改为passed; causing改为caused。

  详解:第一行:此处代指:man应该使用单数的:his,也可参考下文的:his way of life,故此their改为his;

  第二行:此处是单句不需要连词,所以that去掉;前后句子属于转折关系,故此thus改为however;

  第三行:句子主语为:changes是复数,所以应该把has改为have;名词air为不可数,the多余;单词increasing为元音读音开头,所以a改为an;

  第四行:此处应该使用连词:as表示正如、正像,所以like改为as;此处bring about表示带来、造成之意;

  第六行:分析结构可知:laws和动词pass属于被动关系,所以pass改为passed;句子译文如下:由于对生活坏境缺少关爱造成的严重后果,所以属于被动关系,故此causing改为caused。


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第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

此题要求改正所给句子中的错误,按下列情况改正:

该行多一个词:把多的词用斜线(\^*)划掉,在该行写出该词,也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧^*),在该行写出该加的词。

该行错一个词:在错词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

A boy and his father were having walk in the                                 76. __________

country when it suddenly began to rain very hardly.                   77. __________

They do not have their umbrellas with them, and there                   78. __________

had nowhere to hide themselves from the rain, so                      79. __________

he soon got wet. While they were walking home through                       80. __________

the rain, the boy was thinking for a long time. Then at                 81. __________

last he turned to his father and said to him, “Why did                82. __________

it rain, father? It isn’t nice, isn’t it?” “No, it isn’t very                 83. __________

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第一节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写该加的词。

  删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

     2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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