Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校英语文学社最近在招纳新人，你打算加入。请你用英语写一封自荐信，主要内容包括：

1.自身优势；

2.平时英语学习情况介绍；

3.加入文学社后的打算。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to you about joining the English literature club. __________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’m writing to you about joining the English literature club. I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Two. Addicted to English, I have been interested in English literature for 5 years. I find some meaningful things through English works.

Although I’m only a high school student, I have read many English books and mastered many English words. Meanwhile, I know many famous English authors, such as William Shakespeare, Hemingway and Charles Dickens, whose novel, A Tale of Two Cities, is my favorite.

If I can be admitted into the club, I will do my best to expand the club and devote myself to helping the members of it. I think I will have many common topics to talk with guys of the club. So it’s a wise decision for you to let me become a member of the club.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封自荐信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用两种时态来完成这篇文章。自身优势与平时英语学习情况介绍，用一般现在时来写；加入文学社后的打算，用一般将来时来写。要点：1.自身优势；2.平时英语学习情况介绍；

3.加入文学社后的打算。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如:be interested in 对……感兴趣，do one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力做某事。还使用了定语从句Meanwhile, I know many famous English authors, such as William Shakespeare, Hemingway and Charles Dickens, whose novel, A Tale of Two Cities, is my favorite.和宾语从句I think I will have many common topics to talk with guys of the club.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。