题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号^,并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除:把多余的词用(/)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Lily is one of the pupils who is studying in Dongshan Primary School. One day, in her way to school,Lily found a wallet lay on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must be worried. Without the wallet, she went to a public telephone and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus-stop. The owner came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward Lily. But he refused it and went to school. Seen this, the owner raised her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again.
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【解析】本文讲述了小学生Lily在上学路上捡到一个钱包后,通过电话找到失主并把钱包归还失主的事情。
1. 考查主谓一致。句意:Lily是东山小学的一名学生。本句中的who指代先行词pupils,故系动词要用复数,故is改为are。
2. 考查固定的介词搭配。on one’s way to school在某人去学校的路上。故in改为on。
3. 考查现在分词。句意:一天,在她去学校的路上,Lily发现路上有个钱包。这里用现在分词lying,表示和逻辑主语a wallet的主动关系。故lay改为lying。
4. 考查代词。句意:她把钱包捡起来,发现钱包里有很多钱还有一张名片。根据句意可知,这里用it指代上文的钱包。故them改为it。
5. 考查介词。句意:拿着钱包,她去了一个公用电话亭,打电话给钱包的主人。根据语境,这里用介词with,表示“带着,拿着”;故Without改为With。
6. 考查动词短语。call (up) the owner打电话给钱包的主人。call on意为“访问,拜访”。故这里去掉on或者on改为up。
7. 考查so…that句型。句意:钱包的主人非常感激以至于她拿出100元钱酬谢Lily。这里用so…that句型,故very改为so。
8. 考查代词。Lily是一位女孩,故he改为she。
9. 考查现在分词。句意:看到这样,钱包的主人竖起大拇指……。这里主句的主语the owner和动词see之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语,故Seen改为Seeing。
10. 考查固定的介词搭配。这里表达的是钱包的主人因为Lily的及时帮助而一遍遍称赞lily。praise sb for ... 因……而称赞某人。故在Lily和helping之间加上for。