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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你脾你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something． Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat．Some students are even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise, it will do us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．

小题1:name—named
小题2:in删去
小题3:surprising---surprised．
小题4:chat---chatting
小题5:are---were
小题6:On---In
小题7:which---where
小题8:informations---information
小题9:than后加a
小题10:them—it

试题分析：
小题1:name—named 动词name命名与名词a middle school student构成被动关系，故使用过去分词在句中做定语。
小题2:in删去 the other day在句中单独做时间状语，in是多余的。
小题3:surprising---surprised． 对表示人的名词进行修饰使用过去分词转换的形容词。
小题4:chat---chatting 本句的chatting与前面的playing，watching是并列关系。
小题5:are---were 这部分描述的是过去发生的事情，故使用一般过去时。
小题6:On---In 固定搭配in one’s opinion在某人看来。
小题7:which---where 本句是定语从句，后面的句子结构很完整，使用关系副词where引导。
小题8:informations---information 名词Information是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
小题9:than后加a 名词place是可数名词，指网络不应该是一个玩游戏的地方。
小题10:them—it 这里的it是指the Internet
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。
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Why do some people have many friends while others do not?   小题1:  However, it is not so. Let’s look at two psychological experiments which will give you the key to happy interpersonal relations.
The first experiment is called the “Hawthorne effect” after Hawthorne, Illinois, where the experiment took place. A group of psychologists examined the work patterns of two groups of workers in the Western Electric Company.   小题2:  The psychologists changed the working conditions for one group twice but left the other group alone. They were surprised to find that productivity increased on both occasions and in both groups. They concluded that the increase in productivity came from the attention given to the workers by the management. It had increased their motivation and so they had worked harder. In other words, if you take an interest in others, they will want to please you and you will have good relations with them.
 小题3:  After Martin Luther King, Jr was killed in 1960s, a teacher, Jane Elliott, living in an all-white town decided to help her class of young children understand why the Civil Rights Movement had been necessary in America.
She divided the class into two groups: one with blue eyes and other with brown eyes. Other eye colors such as hazel or green were excluded from his exercise. Then she told the class that brown-eyed people were cleverer than blue-eyed ones because of an agent for brown color found in their blood. Blue-eyed people were stupid, lazy and not to be trusted. Jane Elliott did not need to say any more. The brown-eyed students quickly got used to their new role as the leaders of the class. The blue-eyed students became quiet and withdrawn. Then she discovered something very interesting. Four poor brown-eyed readers began to read fluently in a way they had never done before.  小题4:  So if you want to be successful and happy, take an interest in others whether they are your classmates or workmates. Congratulate them on their success and sympathize with them in their troubles. 小题5: 
A．Before the experiment the management talked to both groups of workers and explained that they wanted to find the best working environment for them.
B．Remember that the way you treat others will decide their attitude and behavior to you.
C．The second experiment shows what happens to personal relations if you are rude to or ignore others.
D．The ones who have more friends usually are those who care about others.
E. Jane Elliott had shown that the way people are treated affects not only their behavior but also their confidence and their performance.
F. You may even imagine that this ability was something they were born with because it seems so effortless to them.
G. The second experiment tells us what teachers said had a great effect on the students.
At the beginning of the twentieth century, many people thought that the Americanfamily was falling apart.A century later, we know that this was not the case. However,although the family is still alive in the United States, its size and shape were very different100 years ago.
In the late 1800s and early 1900s, there were mainly two types of families in theUnited States: the extended and the nuclear. The extended family usually includesgrandparents, parents, and children living under the same roof. The nuclear familyconsists of only parents and children.
Today there are many different kinds of families. Some people live in “traditional” families, that is, a stay-home mother, a working father, and their own biologicalchildren. Others live in two-paycheck families, single-parent families, adoptive or foster,families, blended families (where men and women who were married before marry againand combine the children from previous marriages into the new families），childlessfamilies, and so on.
What caused the structure of the family to change? In the early 1900s the birthratebegan to fall and the divorce rate began to rise. Women were suddenly choosing to go tocollege and take jobs outside the home. In the 1930s and 1940s, many families faced seriousfinancial, or money problems during the Great Depression, when many people lost theirjobs. During World War II（1939-1945)，5 million women were left alone to take care oftheir homes and their children. Because many men were at war, thousands of these "war widows" had to go to work outside their home.
During the next ten years, the situation changed. There were fewer divorces, andpeople married at a younger age and had more children than the previous generation. It wasunusual for a mother to work outside the home during the years when her children weregrowing tip. Families began leaving cities and moving into single-family homes in thesuburbs. The traditional family seemed to be returning.
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The Changes of the American Family
Main comparisons
Contexts
Different___1____
There were two __2___ types of families in the past, ___3____, the extended and the nuclear.
Nowadays __4___types of families can be seen than before.
Changes in different ___5_____.
In the 1900s and 1940s
Many of the women had to work outside due to the __6___of money., thus causing the fall of __7__and the rise of divorce rate.
In the 1950s
Divorce rate slided and there were more children . The families tended to be ___8___ again.
In the years between 1960s and 1990s
Different types of familes__9____. Traditional families are no longer the typical ones in America.
A trend worth noting
Author’s opinion on changes
The present structure is ___10____; it will experience changes again in the near future.
完成句子
小题1:As we know, Beijing is ________________________________( 中国第二大城市)
小题2:那个小男孩玩的很开心， 很多玩具在地上放着。
The little boy was playing happily, with a lot of toys _____________________________.
小题3:平均而言，我每周花30 元钱。
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小题4:在他三岁前，他没有见过他的父亲。
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小题5:他们终于意识到了事态的严重性。
At last they _______________ the seriousness of the situation.
文中共有10处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear students,
In order to increase the students interest in learning English and improving their spoken English, the Students’ Union was going to hold an English speech contest in the evening of December 30. Which is going to be held in the school main hall and will begins at 7:30. But the best five students of this English contest will be given prizes. Everyone in the Grade Three is welcome to take part in it. Those who would like take part in this contest should go to the office of the Students’ Union and sign your names before December 15. Welcome to have the great fun!
the Students’ Union
首先，请阅读下列电视节目预告的介绍：
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A.TV1 7:20 p.m. Find out more about Australia’s animal life. This film was made last year by one of Australia’s best-known cameramen, Dougie Bond. He spent over 200 hours filming the birds, animals and fish that inhabit this beautiful continent and for the first time brings some of these unusual animals to our TV screens.
B.TV3 9:00p.m. The popular science programme is back with the latest in technology and medicine. This week, cars that run on sunlight and the story of one baby’s fight to live.
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D.TV1  5:15p.m. Busy parents? Bored children? Do you want something educational to entertain your children while you do something else? This popular magazine programme is for the under-fives. More music, fun, songs and games with Carla and Larry.
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根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
小题1: Many students feel stressed around big moments in their lives like during final exams or when applying to college. Stress can be a pretty dangerous thing, because it can cause you to become sick.. Here are some ways to cope with stress:
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Take a Deep Breath  Breathing is a great way to reduce your stress. Taking deep breaths or doing breathing exercises may seem silly, but it do help you relax and clear up your mind.
Plan Ahead  Most students tend to study hard when test time comes close or do their homework right before it is due. However, having a plan will do a lot to decrease your stress.  小题3:   
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B．Sometimes life gets pretty stressful.
C．Read an interesting book.
D．Some stress comes from doing everything you’re asked to do.
E. It is essential that we allow our bodies to recover from daily stress.
F. Give yourself the appropriate amount of time to complete tasks, and break those tasks down into manageable portions.
G. You can lose yourself for a while in the music.
句型转换(不改变原句的意思)
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小题5:I insist that Mary should arrive at the school gate ahead of time.
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(2014·日照模拟)The new traffic rules that took effect on January 1 are much stricter than________in the past.
A．that　B．this
C．itD．those

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