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11．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim准备参加当地举办的"美丽中国"艺术展，来信向你咨询．请给Jim写封回信，为他推荐一个参展作品．信的内容包括：
1．推荐一个作品；
2．简单介绍该作品；
3．说明推荐的理由．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
I've received your letter and known you're going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition．Now I'm writing to recommend a special work for you．
I think you can submit a paper-cut of rooster．Paper-cutting is a kind of traditional handicrafts．In China，people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．I'm sure visitors will be interested in your work．
If you need any help，please let me know．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的英国朋友Jim准备参加当地举办的"美丽中国"艺术展，来信向你咨询．请给Jim写封回信，为他推荐一个参展作品．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
（高级句型一）people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
   该句使用 了动词不定式做目的状语，即to decorate…；
（高分句型二）I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．
because引导原因状语从句，句意为因为它代表了一种特别的中国传统艺术；
高级词汇：recommend推荐；submit提交； decorate 装饰；represent代表；

解答 Dear Jim，
     I've received your letter and known you're going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition．Now I'm writing to recommend a special work for you．
   I think you can submit a paper-cut of rooster．Paper-cutting is a kind of traditional handicrafts．In China，（高级句型一）people like to make red paper into different patterns to decorate doors and windows for good luck and happiness．
 （高分句型二）I recommend it because it represents a particular type of Chinese folk art，and this year is the Chinese lunar year of the rooster．I'm sure visitors will be interested in your work．
  If you need any help，please let me know．
                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 该书面表达的时态使用得当，概括文章所要求的全部要点，而且能够有效地使用语句之间的连接成分，所写内容连贯，结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的．