Question

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处下加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'm middle school student of sixteen. I have a weight problem. Some boys often made fun of me and are unfriendly with me. They call me “Meat ball”，it makes me feel unhappily。 I'm now worried about my weight. Although I am a bit fat, I feel quite well. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very much. ButI like sweet foods， too. Now I am getting fatter and fatter. In the past two months, I have put on 5 kilos. I've got worrying about this, but I don't know how to lose weight quickly. Who can tell me the right way of lose weight? If you give me some advice, I'll be grateful.

Answer 1

1.加a

2.made改为make

3.with改为to

4.it改为which

5.unhappily改为unhappy

6.But 改为and

7.foods改为food

8.got改为been

9.去掉that

10.lose改为losing

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题

1. middle school student of sixteen，student为可数名词，需加数量词，故加a

2. boys often made fun of me，时间副词为often，可知是经常性的事情，应当用现在时表述，故made改为make

3. unfriendly with me.，对某人不友好应用句式be unfriendly to sb，故with改为to

4. call me “Meat ball”，it makes me feel unhappily，两个句子不得什么都不用就连接起来，因此应该加上连接词，把it改为which，使其成为非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子，故it改为which

5. makes me feel unhappily，在此句中，feel为使役动词，后接形容词，表示感到….故unhappily改为unhappy

6. 改为and；第八句I love eating meat very much. But I like sweet foods，我喜欢吃肉，我也喜欢吃甜食，两个句子是并列关系，不是转折关系，故But 改为and

7. like sweet foods，food是不可数名词，不能加s，故foods改为food

8. got worrying about this，一直担心某事，应用be worrying about.. 再改为现在完成时，故got改为been

9. don't know how to lose weight quickly. how可以做宾语从句的连接词表示如何的意思，不需再加一个连接词，故去掉that

10. can tell me the right way of lose weight，介词后应用动词ing形式，谁能告诉我减肥的正确方法，故lose改为losing

考点：考查短文改错