题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is reported that thirty cellpones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed(粉粹) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion the other day. There are two different viewpoints about them.
Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats by using cellphones. However, the others don’t think so. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellpones for study.
Personal speaking, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.
【答案】
【1】在cellphones 和 taken之间加were
【2】hold---held
【7】them---it
【3】necessarily--- necessary
【4】with--- without
【5】message--- messages
【6】去掉the others中的the
【8】at---in
【9】Personal--- Personally
【10】more--- rather
【解析】
【1】在cellphones 和 taken之间加were cellphones和taken away之间是被动关系，在根据后面的were，可知此处用一般过去时态的被动语态。故在cellphones 和 taken之间加were。
【2】hold---held the other day几天前，可知用一般过去时态，故把hold---held。
【7】them---it 句意：关于这件事有两个不同的视频，故把them---it。
【3】necessarily--- necessary 句意：一些人认为是必要的。形容词在这里做宾语补足语，故把necessarily--- necessary 。
【4】with--- without 此处考查虚拟语气，“没有手机，学生将会集中精力在学习上”。故把with--- without。
【5】message--- messages message是可数名词，“阅读垃圾信息”，故把message--- messages。
【6】去掉the others中的the some---，others---一些---，另一些。故去掉the others中的the。
【8】at---in 固定搭配：in the age of---，在---时代。故把at---in。
【9】Personal--- Personally 独立主格结构，副词修饰现在分词，故把Personal--- Personally。
【10】more--- rather 句意：我们应该教育他们而不是毁掉他们的手机。rather than而不是，故把more--- rather。
