题目内容
【题目】(题文)假如你是李华,你的好友李明在中学生英语朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1. 向他表示祝贺;
2. 请他介绍成功的经验;
3. 希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ming,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Recitation Contest for middle school students, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Recitation Contest for middle school students, so I’m writing to send my congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
As your best friend, I’m proud of you! I know you have always been hard-working and your efforts have paid off eventually. Your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, have left me a deep impression. I hope that I can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your English? Your experience will be of great help to me in my learning.
I’d appreciate it if you could write me back and give me your advice. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章贴近考生生活,比较好写。要点给的非常明确,考生可以根据要点写出每段的主题句,然后适当拓展细节内容。因为是向别人请教经验,所以语气要恳切。时态要以现在时为主。
【亮点说明】
所给范文要点明确,条理清楚,语言自然贴切。长短句交叉使用。适当使用了一些较好的词汇和句式:1. pay off 2. leave me a deep impression 3. of great help