题目内容
17.假如你是小明,在某英文论坛上发现一名叫Jane的网友发帖,正在征集关于未来的床的想法;对此,你非常有兴趣,并做出了关于未来床的猜想,请从它的外表、功能、独特性等方面写一篇文章,来回复该网友的发帖.注意:
1.短文应包括要点:外表、功能、独特性,可适当发挥;
2.词数:100左右;开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.参考词汇:灵活的flexible; 湿度humidity; 香气fragrance
Dear Jane,
I have read your post and I am quite interested in it.
Yours,
Xiao Ming.
分析 本文为半开放性写作.要求对一名叫Jane的网友写一封信介绍未来的床的特性.提示虽然清晰,但需要读者继续扩展,写作内容包括:床的外表,功能,独特性.注意还需要自行发挥丰富文章内容.审题时注意本文人称使用一人称.
重要短语:
put forward,提出,In appearance,在外表上,In this way,照这样,以这种方式.
高分句子:
1.It is strongly believed that this new bed will be welcomed warmly in the future.本句含有重要句型,It is strongly believed that,我们可以坚信.
2.I have put forward some opinion about a new type of bed according to the requirements of people in the future.本句后面according to后跟短语做句子状语.
解答 Dear Jane,
I have read your post and I am quite interested in it. I have put forward some opinion about a new type of bed according to the requirements of people in the future. In appearance,besides looking beautiful,it is more flexible in structure and is easy to carry and move around. It may have many additional functions. It can change the temperature and humidity of the surroundings.In this way,people can feel cool in summer and warm in winter. Last but ont least,it can play music and produce a pleasant fragrance to help people sleep more soundly. It is strongly believed that this new bed will be welcomed warmly in the future.
I hope you like my idea.
yours,
Xiao Ming
点评 本篇文章已经给出了介绍床的一些要点,而仅仅凭借这些写作是不够的,内容不丰富,字数也不够.因此考生需要对单独的一点进行补充,扩写.在扩写中应用上高水平的句型以及词汇词组,来增加作文亮点,使作文脱颖而出.