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12.假如你是李华.今年寒假你将参加"英国名校两周游"夏令营,计划7月份你在伦敦逗留三天 (7月13-15日),住在Wellington Hotel.你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国的学生Charlie见面,请你给他写一封邮件,简单介绍伦敦的行程;希望见面并商量见面时间和地点.
注意:1.词数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计人总词数.
Dear Charlie,
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit.                                
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息写一封邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:寒假你将参加"英国名校两周游"夏令营,计划7月份你在伦敦逗留三天 (7月13-15日),住在Wellington Hotel.你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国的学生Charlie见面,请你给他写一封邮件,简单介绍伦敦的行程;希望见面并商量见面时间和地点,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.3.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
It is scheduled that we will stay in London from July 12th to 15th.(高分句型一)it作形式主语,that为真正的主语从句
I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon of July 14th at Wellington Hotel,where we will be staying.(高分句型二)句中if为宾语从句,where为定语从句

解答 Dear Charlie,
     How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit.How is everything going with you and your family?My parents and I miss you very much.(写信开头)
     This summer vacation,I will join a two-week camp to visit some of the famous universities in the UK.It is scheduled that we will stay in London from July 12th to 15th.(高分句型一)(介绍伦敦行程)I want to see you very much.I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon of July 14th at Wellington Hotel,where we will be staying.(高分句型二)We won't have any planned activities then.Please let me know if it is convenient for you.(希望见面并商量见面时间和地点)
Looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                                                        Yours,
                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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