题目内容
7.In the cold and plain living room,Matt is sitting in his chair.His eyes don't shine anymore.He looks extremely old and weak.Today is his birthday,and he is by himself.The only thing that he has been doing all day is thinking about how sad and lonely his life is.As he was looking at some old pictures,he found one special with him and his friends from college.This picture brought back the days when he had friends and his life was full of happiness.Also,it brought him a sad memory.This memory happened forty years ago,during his last year of college.Throughout college,Matt had a friend named Mark.Mark was tall and skinny.He wore thick glasses.He was shy,smart and responsible.Also,Mark didn't have as many friends as Matt had.He considered Matt as his best friend.As good friends,they knew everything about each other,and they hung out.Also,they overcame many problems together.They were really good friends.
On his twenty-fourth birthday their life changed.On the night before his birthday,Mark called Matt,"Hi!Matt,"his voice sounded strange.He continued,"I have an important project to work on.I'm having some problem with this.Maybe,you could come over and help me with it giving me some new ideas.Could you?"Matt asked,"What time?"Mark kept in silence for a minute,and then he said,"At 8pm.Is it good for you?"Then Matt answered,"OK!See you later."At that night,it was Matt's birthday.So,he didn't want to spend his birthday helping Mark with his project.Matt went to a club with some other guys.
The next morning,Matt noticed that Mark was acting differently.When he went to talk to Mark,Mark ignored him completely.He left the classroom without saying one word.As Mark was walking away,Matt said in an angry voice,"You are selfish.You are just thinking about yourself.I was having fun on my birthday.Why can't you understand it?"
注意:
1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.
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While he was saying it,Mallory,one of his classmates and friend,stood up and started to say,…
"How can you say such thing to MarkYou don't know what happened!Last night,he calledyou many times,but he didn't get any answer from you.He worried about what was going wrong with you.He took his car and drove all night looking for you.【高分句型】He looked at the hospital,the jail,and bars…"Matt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself,saying,"Why did he do it?He could work on the projectby himself,and…"At that time Mallory spoke angrily,"Shut up!He had prepared a surprise birthdayparty for you,and we waited for you or for a call all night long."(解释昨晚的真正原因)
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Tears fell from his eyes.
Matt didn't know what to say or what to do.Before he said anything,Mallory had left the classroom.He sat down and stayed there for a long time.He looked around the classroom.It was cold and plainwithout his friends.It was empty,just like his living roomnow.(Matt的感受).
分析 这是一个故事,所以人称用第一人称,时态以一般过去时态为主.内容包括两部分,一解释昨晚的真正原因;二Matt的感受.
高分句型:
1.He took his car and drove all night looking for you.句子里looking for you做表示状语,和主语He之间是主动关系.
他开了车,整夜都在找你.
2 Matt didn't know what to say or what to do.句子里what to say or what to do是动词不定式和疑问词连用的形式,做句子的宾语.
Matt不知道该说什么或者做什么.
解答 While he was saying it,Mallory,one of his classmates and friend,stood up and started to say,"How can you say such thing to Mark?You don't know what happened!Last night,he called you many times,but he didn't get any answer from you.He worried about what was going wrong with you.He took his car and drove all night looking for you.【高分句型】He looked at the hospital,the jail,and bars…"Matt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself,saying,"Why did he do it?He could work on the project by himself,and…"At that time Mallory spoke angrily,"Shut up!He had prepared a surprise birthday party for you,and we waited for you or for a call all night long."(解释昨晚的真正原因)
Tears fell from his eyes.Matt didn't know what to say or what to do.【高分句型二】Before he said anything,Mallory had left the classroom.He sat down and stayed there for a long time.He looked around the classroom.It was cold and plain without his friends.It was empty,just like his living roomnow.(Matt的感受)
点评 这是一篇续写故事的作文.续写故事一定要和原文在内容和时态上连贯一致,所以熟读原文很重要.其他方面和一般的写作时一样的要求,词语运用正确是最主要的要求,也是阅卷老师给分的重点.
Ambition,however,can have several defects.
First of all it can be unrealistic.We may not be able to see the limits of our own abilities,we do ambitious things that are completely beyond us.Our career masters can see our good qualities and our limitations objectivity.They may tell us that we haven't the ability to deal with people and would make good businessman.We refuse to take their evaluation.We keep on trying.Mary years and many disappointments later we are forced to accept their judgement.But what a waste of time our ill-founded ambition has caused us!
Secondly,our ambition can be too concentrated.We devote our attention to one narrow aim,such as getting distinctions in our science subjects.Everything that may draw us away from this aim is cut out of our lives.In the end we get our distinctions.But what damage we have caused ourselves in the process!We are isolated beings who only care about a particular examination.And we probably won't make good scientists.We lack the breadth (宽度) of view necessary for success in higher studies.
Thirdly,our ambition can be limited to lifeless objectives.We want to gain money,or power,or membership of some circles.Persons who feel inferior try to make up by seeking the respect of others through possessions of these artificial signs of worth.
Fourthly,our ambition may be self-centered.Instead of directing some of our ambition towards community improvement,we may exploit (剥削) members of the community in the interests of self-advancements.In later life we may be ambitious for the success of our children but we regard this success as only a further mark of our own success.
Ambition is necessary in the lives of individuals---necessary for their own improvement and for the improvement of the community in which they live.But,like all blind forces,it must be directed if it is not to cause disaster.It must be tightly controlled by the head and the heart.Otherwise ambition may demand too high a price in terms of human qualities.
| Title | (66)ambition |
| Merit | With an ambition in our heart,we're always trying our best to use our talent to improve ourselves,thus (67)benefiting ourselves and others. |
| (68)Imperfection | Unrealistic ambition may (69)stop/prevent/keep us from seeing the limits of our own abilities. |
| We devote our attention to one narrow aim,and we lack the breadth of view which is(70)necessaryfor greater success. | |
| Our ambition can be limited to lifeless aims,which lead us to the way to build up our reputation through (71)possessions of artificial signs of worth. | |
| Our ambition may make us among those (72) selfish/self-centered people who gain their interests by sacrificing(牺牲)(73)others'. | |
| (74) Conclusion | Ambition is a good servant but a bad master.Therefore,we must try to direct it in a proper way to (75)notcausing disaster. |
| A. | most | B. | more | C. | less | D. | little |