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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Sinan High School，which is one of the key senior high schools in Guizhou，have seen great
changes and progress in the development of human civilization in this area．The history of Sinan
High School can date back from 1904．Since then quite a few changes had been taken place
before it is officially given the name in 1951．
The school is moving to a new place on June 13 this summer，shortly before this year's
college entrance examination．The newly-built school，covers an area of 500 mu，with much
more space but new facilities to satisfy various requirements，is also locating on the Wujiang
River．The new broad way is being constructed，which will make that more convenient for
teachers and students to get there．

分析 本文订介绍贵州的思南学校．它是一所重点高中，有一百多年的历史，现在正搬到一个占地500亩的新地方．

解答 Sinan High School，which is one of the key senior high schools in Guizhou，have seen great
changes and progress in the development of human civilization in this area．The history of Sinan
High School can date back from 1904．Since then quite a few changes had been taken place
before it is officially given the name in 1951．
The school is moving to a new place on June 13 this summer，shortly before this year's
college entrance examination．The newly-built school，∧covers an area of 500 mu，with much
more space but new facilities to satisfy various requirements，is also locating on the Wujiang
River．The new broad way is being constructed，which will make that more convenient for
teachers and students to get there．
详解：
1．have改为has 考查主谓一致．主语Sinan High School是单数，谓语动词也应用单数形式，助动词为has．
2．去掉back或 from改为to 考查固定搭配．date back to=date from意为"回溯到； 开始于"．
3．去掉been 考查动词语态．take place意为"发生"，是不及物动词短语，没有被动语态．
4．is改为was 考查动词时态．根据句中时间状语in 1951表示过去时间，要用一般过去时态．
5．before改为after 考查介词．根据句意：在今年高考后不久．用介词after．
6．加which或covers改为covering 考查定语从句或现在分词．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词school在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．或school与cover之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作定语．
7．but改为and  考查连词．more space和new facilities之间是并列关系，用连词and．
8．locating改为located 考查词语用法．school与locate之间是动宾关系，用be located，意为"位于"．
9．The改为A 考查冠词．way是可数名词，此处表示泛指，用不定冠词a．
10．that改为it 考查代词．it指代上文中的a new broad way．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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