题目内容
目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。(字数120左右)
有的同学认为 | 有的同学认为 |
学校限制我们的自由；学生和社会接触 少；学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的 发展。因此…… | 学校是学习知识的地方：学生应该安心 在学校里学习；学生缺乏自觉性，离开了 老师，可能会…… |
你的看法： | |
One possible version：
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have little interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies。
Personally I think, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests。
【解析】
试题分析：本文为提纲作文。考上要就学校采取封闭式管理为主题写一篇作文。文章应分为三段，第一段写反对的同学的看法，第二段写支持的同学的看法，最后谈谈自己的看法。在写观点的时候，条理一定要清楚，比如用first of all，secondly，besides，what’s more，moreover，last but not least等。写作时要充分发挥想象，以使文章内容丰满，并且要达到要求的字数。此外，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇来提高文章档次。最后要注意要正确使用连接词，使文章通顺连贯。
【亮点说明】本文最大的亮点是使用了许多亮点词汇短语和优秀句式。亮点词汇短语如get in touch with，put their heart into，lack the ability，develop等。Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies。本句中Once out of school,使用了状语从句的省略，that will influence/affect their studies，是一个定语从句，修饰先行词something。多样化的句式使文章给人耳目一新的感觉。在以后的作文中，考生要尽量运用多种句式，避免单一，也能给人留下较好的印象。
考点：考查提纲作文
