Question

【题目】2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图（pie chart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

注意：

1、对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

2、词数150左右，开头已给出,不计入总词数。

3、植入广告：product placement

The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

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Answer 1

【答案】The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.

However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.

From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account. (151 words)

【解析】这是一篇图表类作文。图表类作文旨在考查学生信息转换的能力，要求学生将图表显示的资料、数据转化成文字。在写饼状图类作文时，要注意图表要素的共性与差异以及百分比构成，得出适当的结论。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.注意时态。 本篇作文是人们对春晚广告植入态度的描述，主要为归纳客观事实，通篇以一般现在时态为主。

2.注意内容与要点。 对文章要点描述齐全，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以将饼状图中五种不同态度分成两种基本的观点，肯定或否定等。在两个大类下再分开描述各种不同态度。也可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。可以多用几个不同句式表达，增添文章可读性。

3.表明自己态度。根据个人喜好，明确表达自己对春晚植入广告的态度，给出合理理由。

【范文亮点】

采用了定语从句（As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable.和 And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.）以及it作形式主语的句子（And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement.）。

采用了however；has nothing to do；furthermore；hold the view that；draw a conclusion；take the audience’s feelings into account等高级单词或短语，灵活多样，增添文章看点。