题目内容
【题目】近日,武汉外国语学校高二(1)班李华同学收到一封美国笔友Peter的邮件。在邮件中,Peter讲述自己特别喜爱的宠物狗突然死去,非常伤心,打算克隆这条狗,但犹豫不决,特来邮件征询李华的意见。
假如你是李华,请对邮件作回复,对于“克隆宠物狗”提出自己的反对建议及其原因:1、克隆狗只是外貌相似,个体差异大;2、目前,动物克隆风险较大;3、克隆动物抗病能力差、寿命短暂;4、克隆费用昂贵,不如重新领养。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 内容包括要点但不要逐字翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 参考词汇: clone (克隆) resist (抵抗) adopt(领养)
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your letter of May 2nd,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your letter of May 2nd, from which I know your situation and feel so sorry for you. Your pet dog cannot be brought back to life and you might as well cheer up.
For your reference, I’m writing to put forward some suggestions concerning your cloning a pet dog. Personally, it may not be suitable for you to do so. First, a cloned dog is just similar in appearance. For example, it may take a long time for a cloned pet and you to adapt to each other. Then, most cloning experiments end in failure and there is a great risk of cloning animals at present. Besides, cloned animals are too weak to resist diseases and usually die at an early age. Mostly importantly, cloning usually costs too much, which isn’t better than adopting. Anyway, it is up to you whether you decide on cloning.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:
1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。
2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。
3. 注意语气。既然该文是就狗狗克隆一事给出自己的意见,所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。该文的写作难点给出反对意见和原因:1、克隆狗只是外貌相似,个体差异大;2、目前,动物克隆风险较大;3、克隆动物抗病能力差、寿命短暂;4、克隆费用昂贵,不如重新领养。一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够,内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时,学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。
【范文亮点】
1. 范文采取了状语从句(Mostly importantly, cloning usually costs too much, which isn’t better than adopting. Anyway, it is up to you whether you decide on cloning.
);2. 文章采用了; too …to…;it is up to you…等句型;3. 采用了adapt to等高级单词或短语。