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【题目】每年三月是植树活动月,假定你是李华,你们班开展了一次植树活动,请你根据以下要点,写一篇日记,记叙这次植树活动。

1)活动目的:亲近自然,绿化环境

2)活动时间:2017年3月12日

3)活动地点:西山(距你校5公里)

4)具体活动过程

5)活动感受

注意:1. 运用日记的正确形式

2. 字数100 左右

3. 可适当增加细节,使行文流畅.

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【答案】March 12,2017 Sunny

Today our class held a tree planting activity which aims to get close to the nature and beautify the environment. In the morning, we took a bus to Western hill which is 5 kilometers away from our school. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.

Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect our environment.

【解析】文章要点已经给出,在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点:

1.整篇文章时态以一般过去时为主。

2.要点要齐全,但是不要进行简单的罗列,可以采用适当的连接词,或者是表递进关系的副词如Before、After,使上下文衔接自然,行文自然流畅。

3.此作文要分三个部分写,每个部分要列举一下例子,最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如We feel it’s our duty to protect our environment和Today our class held a tree planting activity which aims to get close to the nature and beautify the environment。

4.多采用一些高级句型,如we’d better wear masks when we go outside,It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions,同时使用一些词组如On arrival ,took away from,put up等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点:扩充成句,因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出,在将短句扩充时,要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达,如强调句,定语从句等,就如文中“Today our class held a tree planting activity which aims to get close to the nature and beautify the environment. ”使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组,如文中On arrival ,took away from,put up等。最后就是要段落清新,层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语如Before、After,使衔接自然。

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【题目】I remember my mother as a strong woman. She came to America when she was 12—old enough to remember her language, she achieved scores and grades high enough to be admitted to Duke University. With a degree in computer science, she finally became the manager of a company in New York. My mother could give fluent speeches, say “wolves” correctly.

It was my mother who always stressed the importance of language. From the time I was born, I was read to. I would fall asleep to the sounds of my parents’ voices, whether it was my dad’s softly accented, or my mother’s clear English. The flow of language was unbroken, and whether in Chinese or English, the stream of communication flowed through our house.

One October morning in sixth grade, after my mother had left to catch the train to the city, I left the house for the bus stop. I was surprised when I saw our car, the door hanging open. As I drew closer, I saw my mother lying on the ground.

In the hospital, it was hard to believe that the lady who lay before me was my mom. My mother could not remember my name. As the leaves changed colors, it became clear that the stroke had created a wall between my mothers mind and mouth: her mind was not any less dear, but the words she spoke were not what she meant.

The battle my mother faced taught me the importance of language. Without it, identity does not exist; relationships cannot be formed; stories cannot be told; directions cannot be given, and knowing anything about anyone is impossible. Without language, communication cannot take place. Without language, one cannot express the beauty of a sunset or the kindness of a stranger. The world would pass us by in silence.

1From where might the author’s mom come to America?

A. China B. England

C. Russia D. Canada

2According to the last two paragraphs, the author’s mom was unable to .

A. think clearly B. express herself well

C. speak D. open her mouth.

3The underlined word “stroke” in the 4th paragraph most probably refers to .

A. an accident B. a hit

C. an illness D. a robbery

4This passage is mainly about .

A. a strong mother B. the importance of language

C. a family disaster D. the significance of teaching language

【题目】Heart disease is the most common cause of death in the United States. Over a million people each year will have a heart attack and 25% will die before they get to the hospital or in the Emergency Department.1Prevention is the best way so it does not damage your heart and limit your ability to enjoy life. Simple ways might help reduce your risk:

Don’t smoke

This means that you should stop smoking as soon as possible if you already smoke, and if you live with a smoker , you should put limits on the smoker.2

Get moving

3Find a form of exercise you enjoy enough to want to do it regularly and stick to it. If you have health issues that limit exercise, see your doctor for suggestions and make sure you begin with a program that will not be too challenging for you to keep with it.

4

Make sure you follow a heart prevention diet, even if you don’t have any symptoms (症状) of heart disease.5You should eat a high-fiber, low-fat diet rich in fruits, vegetables and whole grains. Meats should be lean (瘦的),and fats should be limited to heart healthy fats such as olive oil. Sugars and processed foods should be limited, and fruits and vegetables should make up a large part of your daily meals.

A. Eat healthy foods

B. Manage your weight

C. A heart attack is a very frightening event.

D. The key is to prevent the disease before it starts

E. It’s best if you can get in 30 minutes a day of exercise.

F. If you feel any of these heart attack symptoms, do not ignore.

G. If you haven’t started smoking, be sure never to start this habit.

【题目】阅读下列短文,选出最佳选项。

When I was about ten years old, I was walking down the street with my mother. She stopped to speak to Mr. Lee. I knew I could see Mr. Lee any time around the neighborhood, so I didn’t pay any attention to him. After we passed Mr. Lee, my mother stopped me and said something that has stuck with me from that day until now. She said seriously, “You let that be the last time you’ve ever walked by somebody and not opened up your mouth to speak, because even a dog will wag its tail when it passes you on the street.” Mother’s words sound simple, but it’s been a guidepost for me and the foundation of who I am.

It’s not just something I believe in; it’s a way of life. I believe that every person deserves to feel someone acknowledge their presence, no matter how humble (卑微) they may be.

At work, I always said hello to the founder of the company and ask him how our business was doing. But I also spoke to the people who cleaned the buildings and asked how their children were doing. After a few years of greeting the founder, I had the courage to ask him for a meeting. We had a great talk. At a certain point I asked him how far he thought I could go in his company. He said, “If you want to, you can get all the way to this seat.”

I’ve become vice president, but it hasn’t changed the way I approach people. I still follow my mother’s advice. I speak to everyone I see, no matter where I am. I’ve learned that speaking to people creates a pathway into their world, and it allows them to come into mine, too.

【1】What did the author do when he met Mr. Lee?

A. He talked with somebody else.

B. He was attracted by a dog.

C. He greeted him politely.

D. He ignored him.

【2】What kind of person is the author’s mother?

A. Optimistic. B. Kind-hearted.

C. Strict. D. Open-minded.

【3】How did the company founder reply to the author?

A. He inspired him. B. He played a joke.

C. He invited him to coffee. D. He gave him the seat.

【4】What does the author think of saying hello to people?

A. It’s a way to show sympathy to people.

B. It can build connections with others.

C. It’s a must to become a president.

D. It can bring him what he wants.

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