Question

根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。
1．袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。
2．1953年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。
3．1964年开始从事水稻研究。1981年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
4．生活简朴，不计名利。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Yuan Longping
Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.

解析试题分析：考查提纲作文：写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。首先要仔细审题，这篇作文要点很全，要求准确的表达，注意：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，但是不是完全把要点翻译出来，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。也要用一些适当的关联词。
【亮点说明】Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. 这句话是过去分词做状语，Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.这句话是现在分词的完成式做状语， He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. 这句话用了be honoured as这个词组，Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame. 这句话是as的倒装句。
考点：考查提纲类写作