题目内容

假设你是某中学高三(1)班学生李华。下面是你校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通知,请根据其内容用英语写一封申请信。词数不少于100。
注意:信的开头和结尾已经给出(不计入词数)。

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three._______________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua


One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One , Senior Three. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First , I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners .Also , my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others .As for accommodation , my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition , my home is very convenient in transportation . Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents , who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish .
I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account .
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

解析试题分析:本篇书面表达是要求学生就学校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通知写一封申请信,其实就是要求学生说出自己家能够做为接待家庭的理由。在写作时要注意申请信的书写格式,文章的时态,因为是介绍自己和自己家的情况所以要用一般现在时,当然也必须用第一人称。写作时注意要点要全面,但是不要根据材料逐字翻译,应该注意细节的补充以及文章结构上的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章要点全面,内容紧凑。尤其是 first, also, as for ,in addition 等词的使用不仅把全部要点连贯起来,而且使文章脉络分明,条理更加清楚; 此外,文中固定句式 I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account 以及并列句my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest和定语从句I have also got support from my parents , who said yes without hesitation when informed of mywish等多种句式的运用不但使文章避免了单调,而且也给文章锦上添花.
考点:考查话题作文。

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