Question

假设你是李华，在得知4月20日8时02分四川雅安庐山地震的消息之后，作为校学生会主席，你决定给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
1、得知四川发生地震灾害，心情非常难过;
2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强，很感动;
3、患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时，共计捐款20万元;
4、美好家园可以重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear friends,
　　I’m sorry to hear that at eight two on April 20, 2013, an earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 200 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查提纲式作文：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】 Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.这句话里面有过去分词做状语， A friend in need is a friend indeed.这是一句谚语，Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.这是现在分词做状语， I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. we make a donation of 200 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. 这句话用了on behalf of代表，和现在分词，Therefore, never give up whatever happens. 这句话里面有让步状语从句，Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help! 这句话有时间状语从句，文章还用Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类作文