Question

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John近期将来中国参加短期语言培训。食宿被安排在你市远大路的塔楼酒店。他来信询问酒店的相关信息，请你根据以下图示和信息给他写一封回信。要点如下：

。※图示信息

※住宿费用；每人每天200元

※餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m．一9：00 a．m．；

5：30p.m．-8：00 p．m．

注意：1.词数120左右；

2．开头已给出，不计人总词数；

3．语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear John ,

I'm very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short-term language training.

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

_______________________________________________________________________________

 

Yours ,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

DearJohn,

I’m very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short- term language training. In your letter, you asked me something about Tower Hotel. Now I’dlike to tell you some detailed information about it.

Tower Hotel is located on Yuanda Road. Go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden. Behind the building is a swimming pool, where you can go swimming for relaxing. Near the swimming pool stands a dining hall, and there meals are served from 7:30a.m. to 9:00a.m. and between 5:30p.m. and 8:00 p.m.

Last but not least, as to acmodation fees, everyone should pay 200 yuan per day. Ifyou need further information, please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when you’ve arrived here.

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

Yours,

【解析】考察看图作文与提纲类作文

【写作指导】

本文既要考生叙述图片中塔楼酒店的位置，也要根据文字提示说明培训具体情况。要使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1，塔楼酒店的位置；2. 住宿费用；每人每天200元；餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m．一9：00 a．m．；5：30p.m．-8：00 p．m．

在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，

【一句多译】

穿过进口的门，你就会看见一栋高楼—塔楼酒店，在它的前面有一个美丽的花园。

①Go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.

②If You go through the gate of the entrance, you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.