题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分.
Dear Kerry,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China for a visit. I would like to keep you company as a guide, and my schedule fails me.
Anyhow, I really hope you can enjoy our trip in China. When it comes to scenic spots, I sincere recommend that you pay a visit to Hongyadong, Chongqing, which had become an internet-famous place. Rank the second position next to the Palace Museum in The World’s Most Popular Tourist Destinations, 2019, Hongyadong is undoubtedly the fantastic landmark of Chongqing. With unique buildings as well a beautiful night view, it witnesses the history of Chongqing and represent the spirit of Chongqing people. You can’t miss it!
Finally, please allow me to say sorry to my absent. I would be more grateful if you could accept my apology.
【答案】1.and→but
2.our→your
3.sincere→sincerely
4.had→has
5.Rank→Ranking
6.the→a
7.在well后加as
8.represent→represents
9.absent→absence
10.将more去掉
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。作者向朋友写了一封书信，为自己不能陪伴对方旅游道歉，并推荐重庆洪崖洞作为旅游必选地点。
1.考查连接词。句意：我很愿意作为导游陪着你，但是我的日程表让我不能这样做。前后是转折关系，故将and改为but。
2.考查形容词性物主代词。句意：无论如何，我真心希望你能享受你在中国的旅行。前文已经提到作者无法陪伴对方旅行，所以旅行是对方的，故将our改为your。
3.考查副词。句意：我真诚地向你推荐你应该去看看重庆的洪崖洞。修饰动词recommend用副词，故将sincere改为sincerely。
4.考查时态。句意：我真诚地推荐你应该看一看重庆洪崖洞，它现在已经成为了一处旅游胜地。全文使用现在的时态，重庆洪崖洞成为旅游胜地是现在的事情不是过去的事，强调对现在产生的结果或影响是作者向朋友推荐要去那里旅游，符合现在完成时的定义，且主语是第三人称单数，故将had改为has。
5.考查非谓语动词。句意：洪崖洞在2019年世界最受欢迎的旅游胜地中排名仅次于故宫博物馆，无疑是重庆的极佳地标。本句已有系动词is作谓语，动词rank和is之间没有连词，所以rank使用非谓语动词形式，且与主语洪崖洞构成主动关系，表伴随，故将Rank改为Ranking。
6.考查冠词。句意：洪崖洞无疑是重庆的极佳地标。重庆的地标不止有洪崖洞，所以这里是泛指而不是特指，故将the改为a。
7.考查固定搭配。句意：有独特的建筑和美丽的夜景…as well as意为“和”，连接前后两个名词词组unique buildings和a beautiful night view，是固定搭配，故在well后加as。
8.考查第三人称单数形式。句意：它见证了重庆的历史，代表了重庆人民的精神。句子主语为it，是第三人称单数，且用and连接表示顺承关系，前后时态一致，用一般现在时，故将represent改为represents。
9.考查名词。句意：请允许我为我的缺席道歉。形容词性物主代词my后用名词，absent是形容词，故将absent改为absence。
10.考查形容词原形和比较级。句意：如果你能接受我的道歉我会很感激。句子中并没有than等比较级的标志，前文也没有提到grateful，所以用原形，故将grateful前的more去掉。
【题目】请认真阅读下列短文，并根据所读内容在文章后表格中的空格里填入一个最恰当的单词。注意：每个空格只填1个单词。请将答案写在答题卡上相应题号的横线上。
How to raise a sweet boy in an era of anger
Hours after I gave birth to my first child,my husband held our five-pound boy in his arms and said,gently,"Hi,Sweet pea."Not“＂Buddy”or"Little Man."Sweet pea.The word filled me with unexpected comfort.Like most parents,we knew what we'd name our son but never discussed how we'd speak to him.I was witnessing my husband's commitment to raising a sweet boy.
Because this is what the world needs now,urgently:sweet boys and people who grow them.
There are so many angry men among us.There are angry women,too,but they're only beginning to claim this emotion that has long been denied them.Women 's public anger is the kind of anger that gives girls voices,such as MeToo.But men 's anger tries to shut down the voices of others.Today's angriest women encourage people to solve a problem;today's angriest men murder.
A man uses his car to murder an anti-Nazi protester.A man shoots a congressman at his baseball practice.A man commits mass murder at a Vegas concert.A man kills a large number of worshipers in their church...
The world has turned so upside down that it is impossible for a man to display his vulnerability(脆弱）。Walk into any baby store,and you can see clothes for newborns declare, ＂TOUGH LIKE DADDY”＂。They don't receive explicit encouragement to fully access their emotions.Boys have always known they could do anything;all they had to do was look around at their presidents,religious leaders,professional athletes,at the statues that stand erect in big cities and small.Girls have always known they were allowed to feel anything- except anger.Now girls,led by women,are being told they can own righteous anger.Now they can feel what they want and be what they want.
What about boys?The boy taught from infancy to be tough still seems emotionally doomed.It's time to change.
We don't need to raise kids with gender neutrality or deny natural differences between boys and girls.We do need to recognize that children,regardless of gender,have natural sweetness that we,as a society,would do well to develop and preserve.
Sweet boys grow up to be men who recognize the strength in being vulnerable and sympathetic.Sweet boys are children who've been given,by their parents and wider society, the permission to feel everything and to express those emotions without shame.
At a young age,this should be done explicitly,in organized discussions at school.It must be done all the time in our family homes.Parents must invite their sons to be sad, afraid,hurt,silly and affectionate,and must embrace them as often as they hug and kiss their daughters.Sweet boys learn early on that they can defend themselves against loneliness by reaching out and asking for support rather than turning into people who, literally,grab for power.Sweet boys evolve into open-hearted men who aren't confused about consent and sexual boundaries,because they experience women as equals.Boys will not be merely boys.If we let them,boys will be human.
How to raise a sweet boy in an era of anger
Introduction | Calling my first son"sweet pea",my husband is【1】to raising a sweet boy. |
The 【2】for raising a sweet boy | 1. Our world is a world filled with anger. ● 【3】from a woman's anger,today's angriest man murder. 2.Our world is a world where a man can't display his vulnerability. ●Boys are 【4】from accessing their true emotions. ●Boys are encouraged to【5】 for power. |
The ways to raise a sweet boy | ●Raise public【6】that regardless of gender, children are born with sweetness. ●Schools and families should give boys 【7】 to feel everything and express those emotions 【8】 Parents should create a relaxed environment where sons and daughters are treated as 【9】 ●Encourage boys to【10】support to defend themselves against loneliness. |